Night

dripping tap drips
    while cottage creaks and squeaks -
    I dream for a sleep

homenighthaiku

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Robert Pettit

January 22, 2014 at 6:52 PM

Sounds that we often miss during the day can be heard at night when most of us are asleep and there is less noise.

Linda Jackson

January 23, 2014 at 11:20 AM

After living in a new apartment,moving to an old cottage can do wonders for the imagination. In high winds we have a noise that sounds like someone is under the floorboards in the spare room. I have nicknamed him Fred. Best wishes Linda x