Nigeria's New Testament

In our old testament we were not odd
We had a glorious genesis, we had no cord
Then came the pest from the western world
With their chalk and talk technique… a fiery fraud

In our old testament we had rings not rod
the western parasites came to suck our brawns and blood
they gave us amalgamation… a cruel, crooked cord
they never asked for our consent, we gave them no nod

In our old testament, we had a pleasant pod
the white weeds came to win our wealthy world,
they sold us as slaves… raided us with a rugged rod;
the wheel of our will got stuck in their modern mud

In our new testament, we had no balance board
our legends fought, with their brains, brawns and blood
their effort got stuck in the military’s mess and mud
soon, we started losing our sages to fiery flood

In our new testament… we breed a scary sword
to secure the oil well that killed our pleasant pod
our ruler rules like titans, terrors and a lousy lord;
Gaining grounds through fraud, neglecting our nod

In our new testament… we’ve got the bitter blood
Each clans that made Nigeria, tired of this cruel cord,
the western woes, and their laws… full of flaws and fraud,
We now want to live our dreams in a world void of bitter blood
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Borisov Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 3:55 AM
Adeleke, very, very passionate & urgent! You HAVE "a glorious genesis"! More power to you! With sincere regards, Oleg.
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January 1, 2010 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations Adeleke Adeite ,You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem, "Nigeria's new testament". Once again your talents have impressed me. This poem is strong, passion filled. Many, of all colors dreams of "a world void of bitter blood" 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I wish you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010. May peace and respect come to us, soon. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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December 25, 2009 at 8:05 PM
Congratulations on your first round win Sdeleke. Good luck on the next round, Sincerely, Moses
Brown Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Adeleke. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 22, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Incredible, such anger disputing within this poem. Thought-provoking and such meaning within it's depth. Best of luck Adeleke, best of luck indeed..
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December 21, 2009 at 11:36 AM
Dear Adeleke, Congratulations on winning the first round and best wishes on going through to the finals. Love, Lainie
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December 20, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Congrats Adeleke on winning the first round to ps contest!! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Adeleke! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 9:19 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
Fisher Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Adeleke - many congrats on getting through the first round again, good luck for the next stage. Rgds Janette
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December 10, 2009 at 6:38 PM
Powerful and with deep sentiment and regret. Such emotions are understood for Africans have been dealt a bitter blow by people whom they trusted. But God sees and does not forget. Africa is blessed.You may not see it now but one day you will.
Fisher Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Adeleke - Many congatulations on your fabulous poem being featured this week - hope the exams went well. Many regards Janette
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December 9, 2009 at 3:08 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
Mason Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 5:36 AM
This belongs on the front page of the NY Times or within every classroom ... smile ... God Bless you Adeleke and I hope the dreams for your country one day come true. Wonderful writing here featured this week at PoetrySoup!! Congratulations!
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 4:26 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Adeleke. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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December 7, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
Mason Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 5:41 PM
Can't even begin to imagine this world of war, turmoil, poverty and fear .... I know so little about the continent and all the different countries and what I do know is probably far from the truth as it is filtered through what we call news ... LOL ... western ways have been and are seemingly the most destructive on this planet and I have much shame but also much hope that the younger generations will WAKE UP and bring change ... smile ...
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July 12, 2009 at 8:47 AM
yes, Adeleke, I understand frustration w/leadership! my poem (which offends some, unfortunately) "BBGDFS" tells of my frustration with corporate America, slowly killing us with food produced to maximize profit at the expense of our heath....I had just found a small (illegal) place that sells food directly from the farmers, who get ALL the $$. love this poem!! jim
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June 7, 2009 at 12:50 AM
Like the kyrielle flavour here Adeleke.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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June 6, 2009 at 10:33 AM
WOW Adeleke!!.............I am indeed a big fan of yours. you are blessed with a great deal of knowledge and creativity.....This poem is like an interesting History lesson to me...........!!! I love this as well......Keep it up dear...>>>Crystal
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June 6, 2009 at 8:54 AM
This is an inspiring piece of work..takes me back to by native country...love the title...good work.
Parsard Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 8:09 AM
You seem very knowledgable about your topics I see you have alot of posted poems I will try and review most of them to see how broad your span for poetry really is! keep up the good work
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