Nicole (A Tropical Depression)

The earth grew loose and fell away
The rain just poured, and poured today
The winds rose up and help her slay
The vanities men adored of clay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Eggins Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 3:19 AM
been watching the news and your storm over there .. well portrayed :) thanks again for your comment on my poem much appreciated love Jayne
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Earth, Rain, Wind ..... blending with men..... gud1....
Boble Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:56 PM
Well I can only imagine.Your words send me there.Beautiful.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Yes David u have captured the storm in your lines so very well.. our area got hit pretty badly through the night and the rain and winds were fierce... this is a cool form u used also..I like it .. with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:29 AM
yes, this is awesome, David. And thanks for your comment on my blog. I really appreciate it. Luv,Andrea
Pearson Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 10:28 AM
wow great poem :)
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