Nice Perspective

Nice and luminous perspective 
Nice and brightly coloured ancient village 
Nice and inspiring stone houses 
Nice and flowery alleys in that attractive place 

Nice and enchanting land to visit 
Nice and lovely countryside with orangey walls
Nice and daily crowded town
Nice and imaginary perspective!

@Rita Solis Radius. 20/2/2017. Octave poem “Nice Perspective”. All rights reserved.
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Coreggia Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 9:02 AM
This perspective didn't seem 'imaginary' when I started reading it. Well done Rita.:) Amitiés
Solis Radius Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Hi there, Anne-Marie! Bonjour, bonsoir, dear friend!! I am pleased to read your comment. Thanks very much...i exactky wanted to create the contrast between the idea of a real village, at the beginning of the poem, and the imaginary at the end...^^ Hugs, Rita.
Wanter Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 6:06 PM
I enjoyed reading this.
Solis Radius Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Hi there, Sunlite Wanter!! I enjoy your nice comment! Thanks ever so!!!! Blessings and hugs from France, Rita. ^^
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