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Nibbling the Knight

I breeched her black lace dream as she nibbled the edges off the knight she spun a silver prayer wheel with red lipstick sighs at sunrise we shared a pot of black silence

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Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:35:00 PM

Anthony, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2020 1:53:00 PM

I really like the imagery in this one. Congrats. It is one that I found very interesting.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 1:44:00 PM

Your muse is layered with mystery and emotions Anthony. Congratulations on your win! :)

V. Deepa

Date: 7/28/2020 10:39:00 AM

Lovely deep lines. Congratulations on your win dear Anthony sir:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.~Deepa:-)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2020 8:56:00 AM

Mysterious and compelling, Anthony. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2020 2:40:00 AM

- Four beautiful lines ... congratulations on your win, Anthony :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/27/2020 5:08:00 PM

That last line is real gut-check, Anthony. Well-done! Kudos, Gershon