Nibbling the Knight

I breeched her black lace dream
                  as she nibbled the edges off the knight
        she spun a silver prayer wheel with red lipstick sighs
                 at sunrise we shared a pot of black silence
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La France Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Anthony, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 1:53 PM
I really like the imagery in this one. Congrats. It is one that I found very interesting.
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Your muse is layered with mystery and emotions Anthony. Congratulations on your win! :)
Deepa Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 10:39 AM
Lovely deep lines. Congratulations on your win dear Anthony sir:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.~Deepa:-)
Devonshire Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 8:56 AM
Mysterious and compelling, Anthony. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 2:40 AM
- Four beautiful lines ... congratulations on your win, Anthony :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 5:08 PM
That last line is real gut-check, Anthony. Well-done! Kudos, Gershon
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