Next To Me

I want to sit on a beach, and watch the water crash against the rocks, with you by my side... I want to play in the sand, and build sandcastles that reach to the sky, with you by my side... I want to see beautiful sunsets, and watch the colors of the sky change before my eyes, with you by my side... I want to make love on that beach, and feel the passion that brings me happiness, with you always by my side.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2016 11:46:00 PM

George, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA

George Aul
Date: 1/20/2016 11:32:00 AM

Thanks.... Sorry for the very late reply............. George

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2016 11:35:00 AM

Very beautiful and romantic congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul
Date: 1/7/2016 2:41:00 PM

Thank you for the reply............. George

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/1/2016 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations and Happy New Year!

George Aul
Date: 1/7/2016 2:41:00 PM

Thanks, I'm a little late with replies, sorry............... George

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 10:20:00 AM

George, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT

George Aul
Date: 1/7/2016 2:42:00 PM

Thank you SKAT, got a late start to the New Year replies. Always great to hear from you............... George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2011 4:56:00 PM

The simple things are the best. like this easy to read and lovely poem!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2011 5:03:00 PM

Lovely and oh so romantic lines George.. I am such a beach baby and relate so well to your grand words ... waiting for beach weather to experience such a scene as u painted in this piece luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/17/2011 5:25:00 PM

Beautiful passionate write, George.. I am hoping you shared it with her to make her smile. : ) Always, Annalise

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/17/2011 3:52:00 PM

We have some nice beaches to do all that right here in New Jersey. The trouble is, it's too cold right now. You have described some seasonal good times very well in this presentation.