Next To Me

I want to sit on a beach,
and watch the water
crash against the rocks,
with you by my side...

I want to play in the sand,
and build sandcastles
that reach to the sky,
with you by my side...

I want to see beautiful sunsets,
and watch the colors of the sky
change before my eyes,
with you by my side...

I want to make love on that beach,
and feel the passion
that brings me happiness,
with you always by my side.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 8, 2016 at 11:46 PM
George, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA
Aul Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Thanks.... Sorry for the very late reply............. George
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Very beautiful and romantic congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Aul Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Thank you for the reply............. George
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations and Happy New Year!
Aul Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Thanks, I'm a little late with replies, sorry............... George
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January 1, 2016 at 10:20 AM
George, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT
Aul Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Thank you SKAT, got a late start to the New Year replies. Always great to hear from you............... George
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 4:56 PM
The simple things are the best. like this easy to read and lovely poem!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Lovely and oh so romantic lines George.. I am such a beach baby and relate so well to your grand words ... waiting for beach weather to experience such a scene as u painted in this piece luv..
Haick Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Beautiful passionate write, George.. I am hoping you shared it with her to make her smile. : ) Always, Annalise
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February 17, 2011 at 3:52 PM
We have some nice beaches to do all that right here in New Jersey. The trouble is, it's too cold right now. You have described some seasonal good times very well in this presentation.
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