Next Exit, To the Right

on the outskirts of town
the mountains
adorned in golden tones
seemed to cradle a setting sun
swirls of lavender tipped clouds
beckoned her to follow

the dust trailed
in clouds of smoke behind her
a city lost somewhere in the haze
was left with her past

a billboard sign read
last call for lonely hearts
next exit, to the right

she decided to venture off the highway
down the winding crimson path
that lined the mountain's side

a neon flash at a roadside bar caught her eye
a sweeping melody invited her inside
she swayed to the beat of the singer's every word
it was the best band she'd ever heard


November 6, 2019
for contest LAST CALL FOR LONELY HEARTS – COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier".
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Kauffman Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Hi Sandra, This is such a wonderfully descriptive poem of place and experience. You really brought the situation alive and put us into the picture with your imagery and descriptive words. Congratulations!
Adams Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:20 PM
thank you so much Sam...glad you came along for the ride..it was a fun write... :)
Hamilton Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:10 AM
I missed this one somehow, Congrats on a great write, loved the visuals, emotions, a worthy choice for another win!
Adams Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Thank you so much John...your comments are always so kind...i wasn't so sure about this one when i wrote it... hugs
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:56 AM
I told you. : ) Congrats on your win in this contest my friend. A spot so well deserved.
Adams Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Thank you so much my friend, you had more faith in this poem then i did.... hugs :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Sandra. Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your top win.
Adams Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:55 AM
Wow thank you so much Line for hosting another wonderful contest for the win and your kind words. Hugs
Ligon Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:14 PM
Nice imagery.
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:41 PM
Thank you so much Juliet... hugs
Foster Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 5:40 PM
I wish I had been there... You make is so real. Lovely piece. Well done... Ann
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:41 PM
we can take the journey next time i stop by for tea and cake under the tree, we shall venture down the road to the mountains and check out the band... they are the best around, so i have heard.... thanks Anne :)
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 4:46 PM
Resonates SO, Sandy. You have cut out a slice of pure Americana and penned it perfectly. ~ Sergeant Pepper
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Thank you so much my friend...it was a fun write... hugs
Proxenos Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:36 PM
Hi Sandra, what a magnificent poem, one whose journey, will take you straight through to the winning post! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer, i hope Line likes it, my muse would have normally taken a theme like this and turned it sad, but no depressed poems allowed...this came out of nowhere today... hugs and blessings to you my friend :)
Pandit Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:00 PM
WOW! Just a fantastic take on the theme-Sandy---loved it all the way.
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Thank you so much Vijay I am touched. This one came out or the blue :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 1:43 PM
- So glad she chose the right path ... a wonderful poem, Sandra - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:35 PM
Thank you so much my sweet friend ... it was one of the out of nowhere write me poems :) hugs
Green Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 11:43 AM
What a magical journey I have just been on via your words. This was beyond fantastic Sandy. A poetic story that has me along for the ride, enjoying every mile to this destination. Best wishes in the contest. This is a winner for sure.
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Wow, thank you so much for your kind comment my dear friend...i kept looking at this contest wondering how to write about lonely hearts without it being a depressing poem, as per rules... this one just came out of nowhere a little bit ago...i am glad you took the journey along with me... hugs :)
Michael Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 11:37 AM
I could imagine you in your mustang just drive out of town...into the OUT THERE...Living it...Nice one my friend
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 11:40 AM
Thank you so much Arturo...i don't live too far from the mountains, and my area looks like mountains as you drive so the imagery was easy... hugs :)
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