Newness of Spring

Chirup, Chirupup is now gone away 
For the Cricket now sleeps in the deep woods
Deep down under a bed of dry decaying leaves
Awaiting the spring's warmth to call__ come

Out across the now no-fence pasture
Lies a giant pan of Rice Krispies cookies
White on tan the dead crispt grass made so by the cold hoary frost
Chilled so that it groans from the cold penetrating deep within the ground

The whole earth awaits that warm sun who takes his time
Slowly slipping back closer up, up, up to the Northern Hemisphere
Will spring come to renew or will those deep woods remain dark and deep
Inviting all eyes to see inside the open venerable vault of clearing

Those dark deep woods encourage exploring
To clear away all the tangled briars, dead barren ideas that need purging
Open clear up those winter woods for new growth of spring
New ideas on which to encourage the grow of the poetic mind 

Been in winter long enough in that cold barren woods
Trapped in the cold lingering by the fire of hearth's contentment
Now is the time to escape_be fresh new
Spring _bring on the novel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/15/2011 8:06:00 AM
everyone antocipates spring with some agitatipn or excitement, sara... breathtakingly beautiful!! hope you're fine! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 3:49:00 PM
I miss everyone here at the soup how are you Sara, i find your poem very interesting... yes,,, the trapness will almost end.... take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,..p.d.
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Date: 2/14/2011 2:31:00 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```S*A*R*A K*E*N*D*R*I*C*K¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:13:00 AM
Spring will sure come soon Sara!Enjoyed your wonderful poem----kashinath
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:46:00 AM
You have some good descriptiveness in these lines and verses. I can't wait for spring to come either.
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:37:00 AM
Lovely poem Sara, how are you? hope to be on the soup more often! love SimoneX
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:25:00 AM
So lovely to read your poetry today dear
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:23:00 AM
First, let me say that I don't know about cricket's reproductive life ..This is strickly imaginary in that part..I don't think that the sun slips up but the earth moves in its orbit..Not sure about that would have to look it up..Just trying to convey an idea.I will look both of those up to check out the correctness of them...Sara
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