Newly Conceived Sunshine

As the sun awakens the forest,
   I ascend the faded trail.
   A doe and her fawn spring,
   startled by the stranger,
   traipsing through their paradise.
   These overlooked alpine slopes
   soak in tranquility, 
   and newly conceived sunshine.
   Enchanted and purified I drink
   from untouched springs of refreshment.

   Give the valleys to the cities.
   Grant the plains to the farmers.
   Leave the mountains to her unsettled visitors.

   Where civilization grows,
   ugliness breeds in desperate streets.
   Pollution collects beside her gutters.
   Man turns on himself in greed.
   In the places people gather,
   desecration and hatred are common,
   and he is cut off from himself.
   His cities are bastions of confusion,
   concrete coffins awaiting the fill.
   Save me from our urban abominations.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/27/2013 12:44:00 AM
Wayne, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 10/9/2013 11:33:00 AM
Wayne , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:11:00 PM
Outstanding, Wayne. Great write. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:27:00 AM
beautiful, vivid images in this piece....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:39:00 PM
HELLO WAYNE, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:01:00 AM
wow, this is VERY good writing and it's so true. I love the way you presented this common theme making it more poetic and meaningful.
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Date: 9/21/2013 6:18:00 PM
Wow what an amazing honest insightful write,,, wayne!!!...very well expressed love your thoughts in this thought provoking poem...ty4sharing:0) cherie
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Date: 9/21/2013 5:12:00 PM
Wayne , mark my words..this is also one of ur best works...! Your poetry is not platonic...Every single thing abt ur work is so special and based on reality. Adding to my fav...A:)
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Date: 9/21/2013 3:55:00 PM
Wayne,on the flip side of the darkness comes light and man's goodness. Could it be otherwise? I suppose. But creation has it's own ideas. Rural tranquility softens the glare of urban chaos. We appear to need both. You expressed the duality in your well written poem. Allan
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Date: 9/21/2013 3:23:00 PM
Wayne this my kind of poetry love it one for fav's and a 7 Shadow x smiles
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Date: 9/21/2013 3:29:00 PM
thanks shadow.....I was not sure about this poem. I ended it on a dark note :)
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