Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Quatrain

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- Newborn Flowers -

A broken heart 
who humbly cries 
As the flames began melting 
tears hidden under the seabed

Sizzling hot a trail 
sparkles into the night sky
love comes in colors 
that kisses burn passion

Following your starlight flooding
memories are forever made pure
Even if you are not here
I can feel your warm breath 

Winking to the soul dream of dreams 
Together we can build a future palace
one without fear and pain
Destiny will be eternities shooting arrow 
 
Catching many rainbow on our roads path
Cupid strikes flying saucers land in your space 
wondering if things will ever be the same again
Captivating an angel strums tugging heartstrings 

Do you hear still the melody 
to the most beautiful song playing
Warmly exploring deeply touching tunes 
Covering the bed with rose petals 

Music plays a heartfelt chant sighs 
I miss you dearest flower forever more 
just like the desert misses rain
Whispers held on a cloud of breath beautiful 







A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
10.02.2016
(unrhymed quatrain)

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Funom Makama March 5, 2016 at 10:44 AM Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful... Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2016 at 12:12 PM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Funom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith March 2, 2016 at 11:02 PM My what a beautiful collaboration to have discovered. So glad to have found you... Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2016 at 2:54 AM - Charlie, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid February 17, 2016 at 9:14 AM Also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated bless you all

Liam Mcdaid February 17, 2016 at 9:13 AM Your pen flowers diamond beautiful in this Anne lise thank you dear pal for the pleasure of joining pens with you wishing you a blessed week ahead Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2016 at 2:32 PM - Without you ..... I could not write this beautiful poem, dear friend Liam - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock February 14, 2016 at 11:39 AM Beautiful words by the two of you. Enjoyed. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2016 at 12:00 PM - I'm glad you enjoy it, dear Phyllis - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lindsay Laurie February 12, 2016 at 9:21 PM Well done Ann-Lise and Liam; a collaboration that truly worked - great - Lindsay Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 6:11 AM - Lindsay, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior February 12, 2016 at 8:33 AM Simply superb...great collaboration Anne-Lise..."Destiny will be eternities shooting arrow"...now why didn't I think of that...with admiration... ^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 6:10 AM - Winged, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 12, 2016 at 7:40 AM always a pleasure to read your beautiful collaborations Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 8:20 AM - (I) We'll post a new today .... welcomed back later dear friend, Jan :) - I'm glad you enjoy this one :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong February 12, 2016 at 3:40 AM Your collaboration opens the door to love's longing bliss. A romantic lovely piece to share for Valentine's Day! Mahalo! Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 4:30 AM - Valentine's poem comes later today, Connie :)- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez February 11, 2016 at 6:08 PM Beautiful, picturesque write, Anne and Liam. congrats for another successful collab! hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 4:28 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2016 at 3:46 PM this one was very beautiful. Great imagery from the both of you. Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 4:25 AM - Andrea, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus February 11, 2016 at 3:12 PM Truly an excellent collaboration, Anne-Lise and Liam...sweetly romantic. Whether happy or sad, you make music with words! All the best...paul Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 4:27 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven February 11, 2016 at 1:41 PM Hi Anne-Lise, a beautiful collaboration once more between yourself and Liam. A Belated congratulations to you both for this beautiful work. On the breath of a sigh these words do softly flow within me to touch my heart. You do write incredible poetry when you both write together. Let your songs sing. The tears are brought forth as both your emotions flow as one down the page. It is a blessing to read poetry created by you both. Excellent poetry. A 7 and into my faves....Vlad. Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 4:25 AM - I'm glad you enjoy it, Vladislav :) - Thanks for visiting a 7 + fav. and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud February 11, 2016 at 12:39 PM you both do beautiful music together, anne and liam... i likey!..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2016 at 12:40 PM - Nette , thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie February 11, 2016 at 11:30 AM together, the two of you....create inspiration I aspire to....the Beauty of words is the greatest reward....just like the muse of the pen is mightier than the sword....awesome job you two....;) Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2016 at 12:40 PM - Eric, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle February 11, 2016 at 8:03 AM Beautiful collaboration here, I really enjoyed reading it. Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2016 at 8:07 AM - I'm glad you enjoy it, Angeline :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner February 11, 2016 at 7:04 AM An excellent collab Anne-Lise and Liam. The reader can not tell where one writer ends and the other begins. Great job. A7 for sure. Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2016 at 7:50 AM - Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath February 10, 2016 at 4:24 PM Beautiful poem my lovely lovely friend filled with romantic vibration. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2016 at 7:48 AM - Bl, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 10, 2016 at 3:49 PM Tenderly romantic and beautifully written poem! Another blooming collaboration of Anne-Lise and Liam! A seven to each! Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2016 at 7:48 AM - Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter February 10, 2016 at 2:08 PM Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen February 10, 2016 at 2:09 PM - I'm glad you enjoy it, Dorian :) - Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)