New York Summer

Sticky, humid, skin
Sweltering inferno blaze
Summer has no wind

The flies are dizzy
Joy hums from each piazza 
Two views of day's rot

The hydrant founts glee
No rain promised in the sky
Water is respite here.

The tongue flakes songs
Lovers returned to the parks
Love sparks a new flame

Dreams burn in desire
The heart pants for new friendships
Pale male on his spire.

Summer has no wind
The city swelters without rain
And love blooms again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/24/2009 7:22:00 AM
Yes, give me a nice cooling breeze any day of the week! Well written haiku, you truely capture the weather in a city.
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Date: 4/21/2009 7:21:00 AM
Too much concrete and no palm trees. Give me a beach in South Carolina or further south. Vince
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Date: 4/19/2009 7:13:00 PM
great haiku! L'nass! perfect minimal use of words to extract maximum feeling, superb!! my friend, Jim
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:21:00 AM
This sounds like a Florida summer LOL Hmmm maybe that's why so many New Yorkers used to go to Miami in the winter. You have definitely captured summer in this one. Keep writing. Thanks for you comment on my poem. God Bless you, Dane
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Date: 4/18/2009 10:41:00 AM
Same as Atlanta, GA. except every afternoon it would pour for about 20 minutes to add to the steam and discomfort ... I hated it ... smile ... I'm so glad to be out in the Pacific NWest where nothing dramatic or drastic happens with the weather ... smile ... wonderful haiku here !!
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:23:00 AM
the imagery is so vivid i can smell the local hotdog stand and hear the traffic. excellent haiku
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:17:00 PM
L'nass thanks for your welcome blog comment today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:10:00 PM
Oh man, summer in the city, I can feel it so oppressive. You captured it well. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:02:00 PM
So true. Nice use of imagery and alliterations to convey your thoughts. Best wishes in the haiku contest. Thank you for your kind words on my footle. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 4/17/2009 10:58:00 AM
Been to NY in the summer, Shango, and you describe it to a tee! I think it's all of the tall buildings that block the wind. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn
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