New Year 2013

N  ow is the time to reflect on the past
E  very mistake noted, you have to learn fast
W e must listen to what the young ones ask

Y  uletide  time for 3 wishes anew
E  very minute brings hope just for a few
A  ll prayers asked but not all replied
R  easons for not granting not supplied

2  more wishes  , health is one to retrieve
0  bad moments to perceive-
1  more wish , for love all over the world
3  cheers for the flag of peace to be unfurled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 22, 2013 at 6:06 PM
this looks like fun.~SKAT
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 10:29 PM
You must make it fun , .....Seren
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January 15, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Very Good! I like the numbers.
Roberts Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 5:35 PM
thanks Christopher
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:28 AM
I enjoyed this when I first read this....congratulations on your win...
Roberts Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 5:36 PM
yes you did Mehnaz ...Seren
Guzzi Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 3:22 PM
I really enjoyed this winning write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Thank you Debbie
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January 13, 2013 at 9:43 PM
congrats on your 4th place win Seren, love the way you incorporated the 2013
Roberts Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 11:45 PM
Thank you Francine for including me in your list I feel honoured. Just never ask me for meters cos I am a thicko where they're concerned.....Seren
A   Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:42 PM
Seren, , a good and well done acrostic. Congratulations with your winning poem. In Francine's ' "New Year's acrostic" contest. Take Care~ PD
Roberts Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:34 PM
Thank you PD for your congrats .....Seren
Haick Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Seren! Love, Annalise
Roberts Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:35 PM
Thank you Annalise ........Seren
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January 13, 2013 at 1:53 PM
Creative way to go for the contest..Congrats on your win..Sara
Roberts Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Thanks Sara for the congrats. .......Seren
May Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:49 AM
congrats on your win Seren
Roberts Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Thank you Joseph .....Seren
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December 28, 2012 at 5:11 PM
Marvelous write and nicely done! Best wishes Seren for a wonderful new year! Hugs
Roberts Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 6:34 PM
thank you Cecilia ...Seren
West Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Hi Seren, this is really a great Acrostic poem you have penned here. Rollo
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 4:20 PM
Thank you Rollo, I do try.....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 1:25 PM
wonderful wishes for 2013. It's hard to believe we are already to that year in the new century!!! (new soupmail posted recently for you)
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 3:32 PM
*wishes
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December 26, 2012 at 3:02 PM
Thanks for the wihes..Seren
Veetil Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Very nicely put, loved it. love, Mehnaz
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Hello mehnaz,thanks for your comment...Seren
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December 26, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Nice one, xx
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Hello my friend. Thans for the comment ... Seren
Lander Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 10:07 AM
New poem love the style
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Annie I will have a go at anything lol ...Seren
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