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New Year


shrink-wrapped calendar

pages waiting to be turned

two thousand nineteen



December 30, 2018

Copyright © P.S. Awtry | Year Posted 2018

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Sherilynn Kucharek

February 19, 2019 at 1:05 AM

Very clever! Now is haiku form, syllables of 5, 7, and 5? I have been trying to learn new forms. I have A minute poem that I was going to submit, perhaps it has a different name? Do you know? Anyway, this was great!

February 19, 2019 at 1:12 AM

Yes, haiku is "traditionally" 5, 7, 5... Though there are other variations. You'll see all sorts as you explore this site and all the different poets' works.

January 2, 2019 at 9:12 AM

Nicely conceived … and now onto 2019: The shrink has shrunk, or something like that... :) gw

January 2, 2019 at 3:15 PM

Yes, time to rip off the plastic and dive into this new year :)

Michelle Faulkner

December 31, 2018 at 2:09 PM

Wonderful haiku, wishing you a prosperous and bountiful New Year!

December 31, 2018 at 4:37 PM

Thank you, Michelle! Many 2019 blessings to you!

Andrea Dietrich

December 30, 2018 at 3:27 PM

LOve this . You should have made it a monoku and put it into the one-liner contest.

December 30, 2018 at 3:30 PM

Thank you, Andrea! Hope you have a wonderful 2019!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 30, 2018 at 1:06 PM

- Love the second line ... a wonderful haiku - Best wishes for the new year,P.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

December 30, 2018 at 1:33 PM

Thank you and happy new year!

Caren Krutsinger

December 30, 2018 at 12:40 PM

A haiku that makes sense every year!

December 30, 2018 at 12:50 PM

Thanks, Caren :)

December 30, 2018 at 12:38 PM

Soon be here P.S, hope you have a happy new year. Tom.

December 30, 2018 at 12:41 PM

Thank you, Tom and you too :)

December 30, 2018 at 10:52 AM

Great one! Have a Happy New Year! :)

December 30, 2018 at 10:58 AM

Thank you, Heidi! Wishing you a year filled with blessings :)

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