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New World

One world to live in
Time will tell us what will come
Future good or bad 

 

Date Written:4/8/2022

1 Place

HowManySyllables ~ 5-7-5
New World Order Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2022

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Len Gasun Date: 5/15/2022 8:44:00 PM I strongly agree. Only time can tell. I'm glad i found this brilliant haiku of yours my dear friend. Congratulations again on your win! More power and blessings my dear friend. Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/16/2022 9:12:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this haiku write. Have a great/blessed day writing away....................

Joseph May Date: 4/10/2022 7:06:00 PM As it stands now it looks bad, Nicely penned Paula Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/11/2022 8:50:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. It does look bad. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/10/2022 3:46:00 PM It is coming much too fast for ME. Not gonna be good either!! I enjoyed your KU. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/4/2022 8:59:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/10/2022 3:33:00 PM Your poem speak volumes, in but few words, Paula. It's all up to us and God. Have a nice evening, Evelyn Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/11/2022 8:47:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my few word write. So true when you say, "It's all up to us and God." Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Constance La France Date: 4/10/2022 9:59:00 AM Paula, very nice, we have no control of where this world is going, we just have raise our sails and hope for the best ~Constance Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/10/2022 12:48:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. So true, "we have no control of where this world is going." Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/10/2022 6:05:00 AM Hi Paula, the world waits in limbo as an evil man dictates our future, or so he thinks, for i am sure he is the Joker in a pack of cards, the ridicule of a civilized West or the last man standing alive, then what? Great poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/10/2022 12:45:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you thought this was a Great poem. Guess now we sit and wait/watch. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/10/2022 3:39:00 AM Time will surely tell, simple but spot-on, Paula:) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/10/2022 12:43:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. You are so right when you say, "Time will surely tell." Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/9/2022 3:40:00 PM Time will tell. Enjoyed your write. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/9/2022 5:05:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, "Time will tell." Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Debra L Brown Date: 4/9/2022 10:58:00 AM The New world order will certainly come in the last days, enjoyed. Blessings ~Debra Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/9/2022 3:10:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, it will be here in the last days. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Judy Ball Date: 4/9/2022 10:18:00 AM That's for sure. Prayer is all we have to fight with but it's the most powerful weapon on earth. We should all learn to use it. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/9/2022 10:34:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. You are so right. Did you read my "God's Eyes" from 1/20/2022??? I think you would like it. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................