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New World

One world to live in
Time will tell us what will come
Future good or bad 

 

Date Written:4/8/2022

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HowManySyllables ~ 5-7-5
New World Order Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Len Gasun

May 15, 2022 at 8:44 PM

I strongly agree. Only time can tell. I'm glad i found this brilliant haiku of yours my dear friend. Congratulations again on your win! More power and blessings my dear friend. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

May 16, 2022 at 9:12 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this haiku write. Have a great/blessed day writing away....................

Joseph May

April 10, 2022 at 7:06 PM

As it stands now it looks bad, Nicely penned Paula

Paula Goldsmith

April 11, 2022 at 8:50 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. It does look bad. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2022 at 3:46 PM

It is coming much too fast for ME. Not gonna be good either!! I enjoyed your KU.

Paula Goldsmith

May 4, 2022 at 8:59 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 10, 2022 at 3:33 PM

Your poem speak volumes, in but few words, Paula. It's all up to us and God. Have a nice evening, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith

April 11, 2022 at 8:47 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my few word write. So true when you say, "It's all up to us and God." Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Constance La France

April 10, 2022 at 9:59 AM

Paula, very nice, we have no control of where this world is going, we just have raise our sails and hope for the best ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith

April 10, 2022 at 12:48 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. So true, "we have no control of where this world is going." Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Jennifer Proxenos

April 10, 2022 at 6:05 AM

Hi Paula, the world waits in limbo as an evil man dictates our future, or so he thinks, for i am sure he is the Joker in a pack of cards, the ridicule of a civilized West or the last man standing alive, then what? Great poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

April 10, 2022 at 12:45 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you thought this was a Great poem. Guess now we sit and wait/watch. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Joanna Daniel

April 10, 2022 at 3:39 AM

Time will surely tell, simple but spot-on, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith

April 10, 2022 at 12:43 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. You are so right when you say, "Time will surely tell." Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Kim Rodrigues

April 9, 2022 at 3:40 PM

Time will tell. Enjoyed your write.

Paula Goldsmith

April 9, 2022 at 5:05 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, "Time will tell." Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Debra L Brown

April 9, 2022 at 10:58 AM

The New world order will certainly come in the last days, enjoyed. Blessings ~Debra

Paula Goldsmith

April 9, 2022 at 3:10 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, it will be here in the last days. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

Judy Ball

April 9, 2022 at 10:18 AM

That's for sure. Prayer is all we have to fight with but it's the most powerful weapon on earth. We should all learn to use it. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith

April 9, 2022 at 10:34 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. You are so right. Did you read my "God's Eyes" from 1/20/2022??? I think you would like it. Have a blessed spring day writing away....................

New World

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