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Tender kisses of deep affection Reflection of what could be Seeing you with me We collide, then subside My O` My, I feel alive Survive these days of misfortune You arrive with a smile I pile up my emotions Hoping not to crumble Tumble from this wall I built Mumble those words of certain disaster Master the feelings of happily ever after Doesn't matter your here with me I see you,and me becoming"WE" Freely weave a life together Despite the weather it wont sever My hope for Forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/25/2011 1:36:00 PM
This is absolutely wonderful! Its good to have someone you love!
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:26:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2011 6:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 8/24/2011 3:12:00 PM
hey Amanda, i like this, sensuous stuff, David
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