New Love



Under silver crescent moon
He tastes lips of ruby red
Her touch caresses his face
Love is born anew

kisslovemoonsongdodoitsu

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Just Dylan

April 6, 2019 at 9:13 PM

So sweet and so pure!

Michelle Mac Donald

May 7, 2016 at 7:35 AM

Nothing abstract nor inconsistent with this write, Shane! Short and sweet but has unfathomable depth. Keep well, love from your pal, Mikki

Shane Cooper

May 7, 2016 at 4:43 PM

Thank you Mikki, I really enjoy the structure of Japanese poetry, to try to express so much in such a minimalist way. I am not good at it but I try, maybe one day. Stay safe sweet lady, Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 5, 2015 at 4:49 AM

- A beautiful and delighted poem, dear Shane :) - I wish you a wonderful day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper

August 5, 2015 at 5:12 AM

My lovely friend, Again I thank you for stopping to read one of my poems. Your friendship is so thing I truly cherish. May your day be joyous And your heart find contentment Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian

August 5, 2015 at 12:03 AM

Romance is sweet....this poem a treat! :) Glad you are posting poems, Shane. Keep on keeping on, dear.

Shane Cooper

August 5, 2015 at 5:06 AM

Hello little Bambi, Love is always reborn and is always as beautiful as the first tender kiss, it never dies only lies quietly sleeping waiting for the spring thaw. Stay safe my friend Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

August 4, 2015 at 4:09 AM

ohhh how romantic Shane - truly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx

Shane Cooper

August 4, 2015 at 4:59 AM

Hi Jan, I am happy that you like this Dodoitsu. The image of a crescent moon has been in my mind of late just waiting to find its setting. Love Shane xxx

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