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New Futures Borne

Intergalactic travel reveals some kinks. Man visited mars and left a sphinx. Cydonia and Mesopotamia saw new futures borne. The “Tower of Babel” and ancient technology…men mourn. Was man’s “spirit world” formerly preserved on Mars? Did “sons of God” once travel among the stars? Egyptians learned to build sphinxes to provide for souls. Their tradition, also, distantly reverenced afterlife’s goals. The Tower of Babel…great technology…lost. Travel through the heavens was stopped at great cost. Many marvels, modern man cannot explain. A sphinx on a distant planet, mysteries remain. © Dane Smith-Johnsen September 15, 2010

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Date: 9/23/2010 1:19:00 PM
Many congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Carolyn' out of this world contest >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:31:00 PM
YOu really did well with your poem there, Dane Ann, and hey, where have you been? don't see you too much! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations Dane, on placing in the top 10. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Dane
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:40:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in this contest... a wonderful write ..enjoy my friend with luv...
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:25:00 AM
Yes, where DID this technology come from, Dane Ann? Not only the sphinx but the Tower of Babel as well. I like the way you allow science and religion to work together in your poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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