Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Diamante

- New Fall-

September
                                            Red, yellow, orange
                                        Crackling gloss and color
                                 Leaves dancing beautifully in the air
                    Cold, clear air a quiet morning before the sun has risen
                          Small streams are converted to large waterfalls
                                   A melancholy goodbye to summer
                                                A silent prayer
                                                     Thanks



                                                       
                                                         






02.09.2013
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Duncan Chappell September 15, 2013 at 1:04 AM passion in words passion in love nothing more graceful i love it thank you xxxx duncan Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2013 at 3:19 AM - Duncan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid September 11, 2013 at 9:55 AM AS THE SUN SMILES BEAUTIFUL PIECE Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2013 at 10:02 AM - Liam, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Louis Rams September 8, 2013 at 5:31 PM all the beauties o the fall have been beckoned to your call. beautifully written. Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2013 at 11:34 PM - Louis, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Litan Dey September 8, 2013 at 12:16 AM By a small poem you expressed so many things....All the best. Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2013 at 5:41 AM - Litan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort September 7, 2013 at 7:19 AM Dear A-L A, I can tell you are on another continent by the way you date your work. The symmetry of words and the shape you make remind me of a flying saucer or a frisbee. Here it comes, ready or not. As you so aptly point out, everything is beautiful. You have a connection to this planet that we only wish more could have. The last line is perfect. We are so lucky to have what we have. For what you have posted--thanks. Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2013 at 7:26 AM - Thanks, Duke & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish September 6, 2013 at 9:40 PM Nice portrayal of the season of colorful leaves and football. Clever shape poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2013 at 2:47 AM - Thanks, Matthew & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway September 6, 2013 at 11:54 AM what a very beautiful poem my friend Anne.I like the form, like the thoughts and your creativity..Thanks for sharing this. Good day!! :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2013 at 11:58 AM - Thanks, Maria & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller September 5, 2013 at 9:19 AM that;s a beautiful and colorful expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2013 at 2:05 PM - Thanks,Marlon & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2013 at 2:04 PM - Thanks,Erich & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll September 5, 2013 at 5:40 AM Hi Anne, Colorful write depicting a wonderful time of the year.. Ken.. Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2013 at 5:52 AM - Thanks,Ken & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May September 5, 2013 at 5:22 AM wonderful write Anne...thanks for stopping by...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2013 at 5:23 AM - Thanks,Josegh & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko September 4, 2013 at 11:57 PM Beautifully penned Anne, glad to read this beautiful painting of yours :) wishing you a lovely day there and thank you for your lovely comments through my pages before :D hug, yanny Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2013 at 2:02 AM Thanks,Yanny & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo September 4, 2013 at 2:19 PM Very nice poem, I love the colors that this Season brings. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2013 at 2:22 PM - I'm so glad you're back, Lucilla my friend !! - Thanks, for visit & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 4, 2013 at 12:39 PM is is autumn there, anne... love to revisit this one... looking forward to a new piece soon... :) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2013 at 2:03 PM - Thanks, Nette & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2013 at 11:03 AM You are reminding me of the cold winter coming up. Do not want to say goodbye to summer this year. It has been way to short. Nicely done on this poem.Come and join me for cake and coffee. Baking a banana cake from a recipe i found on line. Second time I have made it. take care. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2013 at 11:11 AM - Keep it warm .... I'm going with the first plane... - It would be really nice, Phyllis .... coffee and freshly baked cake :) - - Thanks, for visit & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels September 4, 2013 at 6:52 AM Anne Lise, what a beauty this is.. While some are saying goodbye to Summer I am welcoming Spring on this side of the world. You really make this form look easy :) *hugs & love* Wilma Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2013 at 6:55 AM - Thanks, Wilma & welcome to fall (you: Spring) . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2013 at 12:04 AM Is there still a fall contest going on? This is very pretty for fall. Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2013 at 2:03 AM - Thanks, Andrea & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :) - Not for contest.

Donna Jones September 3, 2013 at 6:57 PM Colorful, cracking, cold...and a prayer....lovely Anne Lise...thank you... Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2013 at 2:02 AM - Thanks, Donna & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler September 3, 2013 at 3:18 PM I love this poem, Anne-Lise! Very nicely done! ...Fall is definitely one of my favorite times of the year. It is sad when summer ends, but I welcome fall with open arms!...You might like my poem "Ode To Autumn"....Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem "The Shy Rose". I am so glad you enjoyed it, my friend! Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 3:21 PM - Thanks, Kelly & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joyce Johnson September 3, 2013 at 2:52 PM But I think you really love the fall. thank you for your always kind comments. Love, Joyce Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 3:00 PM I love summer and sunshine, Joyce ..... but fall is coming anyway .... and it is beautiful. - Thanks, Joyce & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 3, 2013 at 11:24 AM hello from me to you, anne.. a dimaomg this is as i wish you a wonderful tuesday!..:) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 11:45 AM - Thanks, Nette & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito September 3, 2013 at 9:05 AM I'll miss the 9pm sunsets, but my body is SO ready for the gentle chill of Fall's late afternoons. Excellent! Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 9:57 AM - Thanks, Drake & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick September 3, 2013 at 5:18 AM Enjoyed reading your description of fall..I like this form..Fall is almost upon us..I hope that this year the leaves will be beautiful..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 5:21 AM - Thanks, Sara & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed September 3, 2013 at 4:54 AM This is just the start I need to my morning dear Anne Lise. Lovely work, have a great day ahead...Mustapha. Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 4:55 AM - Thanks, Mustapha & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis September 3, 2013 at 3:49 AM Marvelous! A 24 carat diamond! 7! :-)! Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 3:51 AM - Thanks, Demetrios & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason September 2, 2013 at 6:34 PM your poems bring out conflicting emotions for the colorful beauty of fall but the loss of summer. Well done! Warm thoughts, Ralph Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 2:37 AM - Thanks, Ralph & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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