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New England Morning

It was a day as all days should be, with every tree impressively arrayed in lush summer growth. As if on cue, the luster of the grass illuminated you in bright reflected light - a sight to last for ever in the memory. Sunlight cascaded down your shoulder, setting your golden beautifully braided hair on fire. You seemed in that moment inspired, a soul in foment, open to new yearnings, emerging from the pupa of mother-daughter-wife, your thoughts now turning to Europe, and the promise of new life. This, then, was the start. And there you sat, divining in the caverns of the heart that something huge was dawning. It was a day as all days should be, shining with possibility. It was life's perfect morning.

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Date: 4/8/2017 6:07:00 AM
Very well penned.... Congrats Michael, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Michael Coy
Date: 4/8/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thank you very much, Teddy!
Date: 3/17/2017 12:32:00 AM
There is a very attractive and seductive cadence to your rhyme. I love the likening of a soul in foment, emerging from a pupa, that is simply beautiful. As is caverns of the heart :) And the whole paints a picture, a painting, almost like a VanGogh or Pisarro.
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/17/2017 4:09:00 AM
I think I should pay you a fee for your comments! They are always very complimentary, very nicely and elegantly expressed ... and they always find the target!
Date: 3/16/2017 3:05:00 PM
This is a very nice write.. Michael :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/16/2017 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi! It's very nice of you to say so!

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