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'new Depths With You'

If for every minute I thought of you
A wave should hit the shore
The ocean would be a perfect shade of blue 
These days I just want more
Like a treasure I need to explore
The depth of your very being
Generates this implausible feeling 
Catapulting me onto new terrain 
I can’t say that it is not pleasing
I hope that it will never wane...

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C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 2/16/2011 12:14:00 AM

how sweet is this poem ,as sweet as a chocolate bar:)lovely!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2011 7:46:00 PM

Hi, Wilma,, been a while since i've been on the soup..lol.. seems like forever.. but,,just a week.. how are,, you,.. in deep with someone.. it seems... but, in a nice way.. enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

John Rhinem

Date: 2/14/2011 9:55:00 PM

S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```W*I*L*M*A N*E*E*L*S¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/14/2011 4:03:00 PM

Hello Wilma, Oh my dear, this is beautiful! I love the words here, You are very pure at heart With so much love and passion in your work. I enjoy reading you and you know you do inspire me. Thank you Wilma Lov, Shar

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/14/2011 7:10:00 AM

Beautiful, Wilma. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Happy Valentines. Thanks for your gracious comments. Have a super week. luv Ralph

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/14/2011 4:58:00 AM

You are a very talented person, Wilma! Great job of it! Happy valentine's day !

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/14/2011 2:12:00 AM

oh wow-- well lucky is he whoever you had in mind, missy-- wouldn't that be awesome, a perfect blue ocean-- really romantic write and now you got me wondering what this form is? this sure flowed really well for me-- enjoyed it much, missy :) & a happy valentine's day to you :D hugs

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2011 4:06:00 PM

I love this poem, it is so beautiful and this form is amazing, I better give this one a try, thanks for inspiring me with your poem~~

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/13/2011 2:28:00 PM

lovely poem of wanting more and more... which is exactly what you should always strive for.. love this Wilma dear... and thanks for going back and reading some of my other earlier writes(crazy right?)...love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2011 2:22:00 PM

The "you" of the poem must be quite a guy! Deep blue like the ocean too. Hi, Wilma. I am getting off shortly. Nice to catch you here.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/13/2011 11:10:00 AM

wonderful write Wilma!This form is new to me-----kashinath

James Fraser

Date: 2/13/2011 10:52:00 AM

Beautiful dreamy poem Wilma, and may your desires never wane. Have a lovely Sunday evening....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2011 9:16:00 AM

I have never seen the "dizain" for before, Wilma, but you wrote so beautifully in it. These days we don't know whether love will last or not, but if you have found someone, then he is blessed with a prize. Hold him dear to your heart forever. Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/13/2011 8:57:00 AM

Incredibly romantic and beautiful, Wilma.. This I will add to my List of Favs. Hope your weekend was fine...it's almost over by now, looking at the time here. : ) Love to you! Annalise