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New Day Borning

When sunlight suddenly appears on the horizon Recognize that a new day is about to be born It places itself in our hands to do with as we wish. written January 18, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/18/2022 5:31:00 PM

Nice Tristich, Milt. First one I've read. I liked this one, well written and good form. Still amazing repertoire of forms. Have a great day my friend, Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/18/2022 5:49:00 PM

Thanks, Bill. It's the first time I have used that form. I hope it was correct. I wrote the lines, but I couldn't figure out what form they fit, so I went searching. Give it a try.