New Dawn

Dawn erupts the day my frozen heart drips ~with ~dew still lingering from our last midnight kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Hello Tim this poem is romantic. I feel the lovein this poem.Lucky woman Have a nice day my friend.
A   Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Wow, that's intense. Tim, i can't remember missing that one last kiss like this. A very pleasing write. I can feel the sorrow... hugs. Linda
Hagy Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Simply tantalizing Tim!... love the line structure too :)
Michael Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:16 PM
I hope that wasn't too long ago...Nice imagery...All the best Tim
Lane Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:34 PM
That's some kiss to melt a frozen heart. Nicely done, Tim.
Downing  Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:32 PM
WOW WOW!!! Simply simply stunning, Tim!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Wow Tim, I can see a myriad of metaphors in this brilliant piece! : )
Bauer Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:00 PM
nice one, tim! i enjoyed...
Smith Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thanks Ilene
Smith Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:32 PM
I don't know what's going on with formatting. It's been odd for the past few days
Smith Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:40 PM
Figured out the glitch, for centering you have to start 6 lines down
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