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Car Brand New Minivan Trimmed in Metal Showing it off, can't wait to pay it off.

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Date: 4/27/2018 11:45:00 AM
Lucky you, my car is over 10 years old - take care, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/28/2018 2:01:00 AM
This is an imaginary new car, I do not actually have a new one, our cars being 5 and 12 years old.
Date: 4/27/2018 11:02:00 AM
have fun in it Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/28/2018 2:01:00 AM
Hahaha I must be getting better at poetry-lying.
Date: 4/27/2018 7:17:00 AM
Fun last line, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/27/2018 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Line. I changed that last line 4 times.

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