New Car

Car
Brand New
Minivan
Trimmed in Metal
Showing it off, can't wait to pay it off.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Lucky you, my car is over 10 years old - take care, Caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 2:01 AM
This is an imaginary new car, I do not actually have a new one, our cars being 5 and 12 years old.
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:02 AM
have fun in it Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 2:01 AM
Hahaha I must be getting better at poetry-lying.
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Fun last line, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Thanks Line. I changed that last line 4 times.
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