Paulette Calasibetta Poet Verse

New Born Babies

All exposed
                                   Fetal pose
                                   Tiny toes
                                   Button nose
                                   Likes to doze

                                   What a fete
                                   Lives to eat
                                   On the teat
                                   What a treat
                                   Can't be beat



Date: January 4, 2022
For: "Whats New Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

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Paul Callus January 7, 2022 at 10:39 AM That's very cute, Paulette! I like the fast smooth flow and rhyming. gl in the contest. Regards // paul Paulette Calasibetta January 7, 2022 at 1:53 PM Glad you like it! Thanks for the emcouragment! :) Paulette

Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2022 at 10:05 AM Love the innocence of this of both babe and mother! Paulette Calasibetta January 7, 2022 at 1:53 PM Babies do bring a smile on our faces! :) Paulette

Delice Arleen Skelly January 7, 2022 at 1:04 AM Paulette, what a good entry for the contest...Delice Paulette Calasibetta January 7, 2022 at 8:47 AM Thanks Delice...I have my fingers crossed! :) Paulette

Bill Baker January 6, 2022 at 4:45 PM You nailed it Paulette, and made it fun to read too. Got to love those new borns, so precious and so tiny. :-) Have a great week! Bill Paulette Calasibetta January 6, 2022 at 5:13 PM Hi Bill….yes, babies are by far the most loved individuals on earth. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Gershon Wolf January 6, 2022 at 3:51 PM Paulette. This is really neat: Short & sweet! Nice feat! :) gw Paulette Calasibetta January 6, 2022 at 5:15 PM Glad you liked it…..the mono-verse form is what determined the “short” verses. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :) Paulette

Sotto Poet January 6, 2022 at 9:46 AM Excellent writing, as well as intelligent and precise! Best of luck in the contest, Paulette. Paulette Calasibetta January 6, 2022 at 1:00 PM Thank you Lassad. I had fun with it. :) Paulette

Joanna Daniel January 6, 2022 at 7:59 AM Wow! You clinched it alright, Paulette:) I read your comment on Victor's "Bedtime" and I like this phrase you used, "lost in poetry oblivion":) can I use it as a poem line? Looks inspiring:) Joanna Daniel January 6, 2022 at 9:46 PM Sure and thank you, Paulette:) Paulette Calasibetta January 6, 2022 at 8:35 AM Hi Jo, so glad you enjoy it....a fun write for me. As far as using my phrase "lost in poetry oblivion" ~ happy to be your inspiration for a creative write, but would appreciate an acknowledgement. :) Paulette

Rico Leffanta January 5, 2022 at 11:20 AM Clever and accurate! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Paulette Calasibetta January 5, 2022 at 1:32 PM Thanks Rico....a fun write! Happy New Year and cheers! Paulette

Victor Buhagiar January 5, 2022 at 2:43 AM So cute. We all love babies. Paulette Calasibetta January 5, 2022 at 5:14 AM Thanks Victor. Blessings, Paulette

Deb M January 5, 2022 at 12:34 AM Very sweet poem Paulette. Debx Paulette Calasibetta January 5, 2022 at 5:14 AM Glad you liked it.

Debra L Brown January 4, 2022 at 4:33 PM Nicely written, good luck in the contest...Debra Paulette Calasibetta January 4, 2022 at 6:29 PM Thanks....it was fun! Paulette