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New Born Babies

All exposed Fetal pose Tiny toes Button nose Likes to doze What a fete Lives to eat On the teat What a treat Can't be beat Date: January 4, 2022 For: "Whats New Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2022 10:39:00 AM

That's very cute, Paulette! I like the fast smooth flow and rhyming. gl in the contest. Regards // paul

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/7/2022 1:53:00 PM

Glad you like it! Thanks for the emcouragment! :) Paulette

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/7/2022 10:05:00 AM

Love the innocence of this of both babe and mother!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/7/2022 1:53:00 PM

Babies do bring a smile on our faces! :) Paulette

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 1/7/2022 1:04:00 AM

Paulette, what a good entry for the contest...Delice

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/7/2022 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Delice...I have my fingers crossed! :) Paulette

Bill Baker

Date: 1/6/2022 4:45:00 PM

You nailed it Paulette, and made it fun to read too. Got to love those new borns, so precious and so tiny. :-) Have a great week! Bill

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/6/2022 5:13:00 PM

Hi Bill….yes, babies are by far the most loved individuals on earth. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/6/2022 3:51:00 PM

Paulette. This is really neat: Short & sweet! Nice feat! :) gw

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/6/2022 5:15:00 PM

Glad you liked it…..the mono-verse form is what determined the “short” verses. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :) Paulette

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/6/2022 9:46:00 AM

Excellent writing, as well as intelligent and precise! Best of luck in the contest, Paulette.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/6/2022 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Lassad. I had fun with it. :) Paulette

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/6/2022 7:59:00 AM

Wow! You clinched it alright, Paulette:) I read your comment on Victor's "Bedtime" and I like this phrase you used, "lost in poetry oblivion":) can I use it as a poem line? Looks inspiring:)

Joanna Daniel
Date: 1/6/2022 9:46:00 PM

Sure and thank you, Paulette:)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/6/2022 8:35:00 AM

Hi Jo, so glad you enjoy it....a fun write for me. As far as using my phrase "lost in poetry oblivion" ~ happy to be your inspiration for a creative write, but would appreciate an acknowledgement. :) Paulette