White Sage Poet Shadorma

New Beginnings - a Shadorma

Dawn  shall  break 
                                 Flowers  shall  soon sprout 
                                             Tomorrow
                                         Shall  bring  me
                        New   dreams ,  lasting  thrills  and   love 
                                 With   hope   filled   success 




January 7, 2015
contest: New beginnings - a shadorma
sponsor: Kim Merryman
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Poet Destroyer A January 16, 2016 at 10:13 PM White Sage, congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA :-) White Sage January 17, 2016 at 5:17 AM thanks so much Linda, i appreciate your comment

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2016 at 8:01 PM This is shining with hope and imagery. Congrats on your win, white sage. White Sage January 13, 2016 at 8:07 PM thanks so much Andrea

Skat A January 12, 2016 at 11:20 PM White Sage, Congrats on your New Beginnings win. LUV~ SKAT White Sage January 13, 2016 at 8:25 AM thanks Skat, am glad you came by...i really do appreciate that

Paul Callus January 11, 2016 at 3:50 PM You look to the future with hope and faith, WS. Your positive attitude has lead this poem to a fine win...congratulations! // paul White Sage January 11, 2016 at 4:04 PM thanks Paul

Eve Roper January 11, 2016 at 2:52 PM White, I love the wisdom! Congrats on your win! Eve White Sage January 11, 2016 at 3:43 PM thanks Eve

Kim Merryman January 11, 2016 at 2:02 PM Each day is a new beginning! White Sage, congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim White Sage January 11, 2016 at 3:39 PM thanks Kim

Paul Callus January 10, 2016 at 2:39 PM You look at the future with hope and faith, WS; that in itself is already a winning attitude! ~ Regards // paul White Sage January 10, 2016 at 3:34 PM thanks Paul, am glad you came by

Dalia Shahein January 7, 2016 at 4:03 PM This is just a pretty and nice poem my friend , best of luck in the contest...hugs / / :) dalia White Sage January 7, 2016 at 5:39 PM thanks so much dalia, I appreciate that dear

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2016 at 3:10 PM I LIKE THIS. It's very positive and pretty. White Sage January 7, 2016 at 3:26 PM thanks Andrea

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2016 at 11:34 AM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..New beginings should offer hope..Sara White Sage January 7, 2016 at 3:27 PM yeah, it offers the strongest pillar for hope, I appreciate your comment

Robyn Campbell January 7, 2016 at 8:50 AM Fantastic Shadorma. I hope you win. Love it. White Sage January 7, 2016 at 2:53 PM thanks Robyn, am glad you like it, I appreciate that

John Beam January 7, 2016 at 8:30 AM Great flow and I like the form. It is sort of a European dodoitsu. White Sage January 7, 2016 at 2:49 PM thanks John, it's a shadorma, wrote it for the contest...though dodoitsu somehow takes the colour of it too

Legendary Legend January 7, 2016 at 7:16 AM legendary as udual White Sage January 7, 2016 at 8:03 AM thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo White Sage January 7, 2016 at 8:03 AM thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo White Sage January 7, 2016 at 8:02 AM thanks for coming by...not legendary though loo

Michael Whatley January 7, 2016 at 6:56 AM Great use of words White! Short, and yet vivid. White Sage January 7, 2016 at 7:53 AM thanks Michael White Sage January 7, 2016 at 7:52 AM thanks Michael

Demetrios Trifiatis January 7, 2016 at 5:57 AM Excellent and when I say excellent I mean...a seven. Wisdom is to keep the meaning of words and actions in harmonious coexistence with our thoughts! White Sage January 7, 2016 at 6:23 AM thanks Demetrios White Sage January 7, 2016 at 6:21 AM thanks Demetrios