Eileen Manassian Poet Shadorma

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New Beginnings- a Shadorma

Drizzled love
I'll change to deluge
to sweep you
high above
where you begin to revive, 
buoyant in my love.

Date: January 4, 2015
Contest: New Beginnings- A Shadorma
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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White Sage January 11, 2016 at 4:12 PM congratulations on your placement in the contest Eileen White Sage January 12, 2016 at 1:50 PM you need not worry about that, just get well soon...my best wishes... Eileen Manassian January 12, 2016 at 1:20 PM Thanks WS. Forgive me for not being able to visit at the moment. I'm unwell and on painkillers. Hugs

Paul Callus January 11, 2016 at 3:12 PM The promise of unforgettable heights of love has been rewarded with a lovely and merited win, Eileen. Pleased to see you standing next to me on the winners' podium:) Congratulations!! hugs // paul

Eve Roper January 11, 2016 at 2:31 PM Eileen, I love the beautiful imagery you used and the picture wonderful ! Congrats on your win! Love, Eve

Kim Merryman January 11, 2016 at 1:35 PM Eileen, your romantic nature shines through in this shadorma. You manage to express so much in so few words. Congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2016 at 3:43 PM wow, I LOVE IT. I did not see it because you put it as verse instead of Shadorma and I was checking the forms column!! I like it even better than the other one. Oh, i hope I can do a good one!!

Richard Lamoureux January 4, 2016 at 7:17 AM I'm not sure what a Shadorama is but I like the result. Way to go YRH! Eileen Manassian January 4, 2016 at 9:27 AM Your Royal Highness, eh? I'm so so please with this lovely title, Rick. Bless you. Hugs

Kp Nunez January 4, 2016 at 4:14 AM Loved the first 2 lines... Lovely write that sizzles though the page is drizzled :-). PS. Hope you're feeling better, Eileen. Keep well! Claiming complete recovery for you! Blessings and hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis January 4, 2016 at 2:36 AM Fantastic! That is a New Beginning, dearest Eileen! A seven. Eileen Manassian January 4, 2016 at 2:39 AM Thank you, my esteemed poet. I hope it is what the sponsor is looking for. Blessings to you... Eileen Manassian January 4, 2016 at 2:39 AM Enai tres meres pou emai arosti...Varithika. Ponao....:( Efkharisto....gia ola. :)