New Beginnings - a Shadorma

Wandering,
from my tired shadow-
    toward the sun.
      Looking back,
as dusk’s mystic elixir, 
  liquidates my past.

   ~30 Dec 2015~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 16, 2016 at 10:11 PM
David, congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA :-)
A  Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:17 PM
David, Congrats on your New Beginnings win. LUV~ SKAT
Callus Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 3:29 PM
This is one of the best entries that I have read so far, David. Every line counts! ~ Congratulations on a worthy win. // paul
Roper Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:36 PM
David, I love the beautiful imagery you used! Congrats on your win! Eve
Merryman Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 1:45 PM
David, fantastic imagery in this! Congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim
Mohn Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:11 PM
thanks for the placement Kim...this was a very unique and interesting contest....I appreciate your time and effort
Godwin Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 4:09 AM
Very good ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 4:05 AM
I love the imagery David think this will do well for you:-) hugs Jan xx
Selfa Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 3:14 AM
Perfectly written and done! Good luck for the contest!!! Happy new year :)
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