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New beginnings

They said, "Fake it till you make it". I faked my life, I faked my soul, I faked it all the being of my being. She said, "Just try little harder" I tried it till I was numb, I tried it till I was dumb, I tried it all for the sake of trying. He said, "It's enough, I am done". I was done, Finally, done from it all. I was done of trying, I was done by lying, I was done of faking, I was done by making, I was done by being. You saved me, my saviour, Your full stop, Gave me a new beginning.

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Date: 3/13/2024 11:56:00 PM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 3/13/2024 6:26:00 PM
Great poem, very well expressed ^^
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Date: 2/27/2024 4:13:00 AM
Good one Vibha!
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Vibha Rimal
Date: 3/11/2024 10:15:00 AM
Thank you for liking
Date: 2/25/2024 11:54:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Vibha Rimal
Date: 3/11/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thank you.

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