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New Beginnings

Nature is an Autumnal thief; pilferer of clinging leaves Each one rudely swept away, but a tree never grieves Well knowing in Spring, buds will reappear as sheaves Behold the dawn of sunrise as we begin another day Enfolding us in the sun's warmth with every golden ray Gray skies will often darken the horizons in our lives Intrusive, yes, but with positive thoughts, one survives Never give up, just start over, despite improbable odds Nascence and a willing desire is the impetus that plods Inside our hearts, leading us to pursue another direction New pathways to follow, after soul-searching reflection Garnering wisdom to regard the past as a mere bygone Spurring us to a better life when it's time to move on January 23, 2021 New Beginnings Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 2/7/2021 10:00:00 AM
Very lovely, Jenna, in both its sentiments for hope and its images. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/11/2021 10:47:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Sam.
Date: 2/5/2021 4:05:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in John's New Beginnings contest with this excellent poem, well done _Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Constance.
Date: 2/5/2021 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love your write and picture. Enjoy your win/day with blessings................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula.
Date: 2/5/2021 10:54:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful entry Jenna, funny I thought this was from someone else, what a pleasant surprise to see it is you. That's why I like judging blind. This is a special write, congrats on a great win!
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/7/2021 9:47:00 AM
It's very much the style of Frederic Parker who is one of my fave poets. Check him out I'm sure you may see similarities!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, John. I appreciate the placement. I'm left wondering who you thought might have written these lines.
Date: 1/24/2021 6:43:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery that made me want to strive to write more eloquently. Wow!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/25/2021 4:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Caren. Your writings are just fine.
Date: 1/23/2021 12:33:00 PM
You have a tremendous amount of beauty in your heart. Very vivid!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/23/2021 3:23:00 PM
How kind are your words, Mark. Thank you.
Date: 1/23/2021 12:13:00 PM
exquisite poetry from start to finish Jenna your words are so uplifting this is poetry at its best! :-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/23/2021 3:23:00 PM
Thanks so sincerely, Jan. Your comments are equally uplifting in support of my poetry.
Date: 1/23/2021 8:37:00 AM
Superb write! Oozing positivity! Good luck for the contest
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/23/2021 3:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker.
Date: 1/23/2021 8:33:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Great imagery. Wish you luck in the contest. ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/23/2021 3:22:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes, Victor.
Date: 1/23/2021 7:33:00 AM
I dont like endings especially if the story is a happy one like when you set off on holiday and you are having such a good time you dread it coming to an end. Well written acrostic Jenna, hope you're having a great weekend. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/23/2021 3:21:00 PM
Thanks for the comments, Tom. Being retired...just elongate your vacation!

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