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New Beginnings-Shardoma

This breath of our sorrow will lie in locked crypts with lost keys. The next breath with fresher air- a new beginning Shardoma January 4, 2016 Contest: New Beginnings Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2016 10:10:00 PM

Balveen, congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA :-)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/28/2016 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Linda!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2016 7:54:00 PM

wow, what a thought! what an image. Congrats, Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:32:00 AM

Many thanks for your appreciaation, Andrea!

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 11:15:00 PM

Balveen, Congrats on your New Beginnings win. LUV~ SKAT

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:32:00 AM

Thanks Skat!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2016 3:08:00 PM

I like your unique take on this theme, Balveen. Congratulations on this deserved podium finish! ~ paul

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/12/2016 4:52:00 AM

Oh Paul, thanks!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/11/2016 2:29:00 PM

Balveen, I love the beautiful imagery you used! Congrats on your win! Love, Eve

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/11/2016 1:37:00 PM

Very powerful, Balveen. Love it! Congrats on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/12/2016 4:53:00 AM

Thanks Sandra!

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/11/2016 1:28:00 PM

Balveen, I love the unique creative imagery you used. Well done! Congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/12/2016 4:53:00 AM

Thanks Kim! It has been entirely my pleasure!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/5/2016 2:19:00 AM

Wow wonderful Balveen.. Good luck to you!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/5/2016 10:18:00 AM

Thanks Upma!