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willows weeping white doves wail wild wind blowing black clouds sail broken dreams torn and tattered tomorrows hopes now trashed and shattered dying love don't give up pray to god and be tough Written June 13, 2016

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Date: 2/11/2019 9:29:00 PM
Bravo, Francis. Magical flow. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 2/2/2019 10:13:00 PM
Very nice! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/2/2019 12:55:00 AM
Well-expressed sentiments. Congratulations. God bless you.
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Date: 2/1/2019 10:13:00 PM
Such deep thoughts and emotions expressed in beautiful brevity, Francis. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/1/2019 5:57:00 PM
Wonderful poem and win. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/1/2019 9:14:00 AM
Fantastic, succinct and pithy poem, congratulations on your silver medal finish Francis! xomo
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Date: 10/31/2016 10:38:00 PM
I like this one !
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Date: 10/6/2016 4:12:00 PM
So simple, but so inspirational, Francis. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/7/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra. ...Fran
Date: 6/22/2016 8:52:00 PM
a lovely write.... SKAT
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/22/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT. Glad you liked it!
Date: 6/17/2016 6:49:00 AM
It may be minimal as you said to me down here, but it is great that way.
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Date: 6/15/2016 2:02:00 PM
I love the simplicity of the words, and the all lower case, no caps, adds to the simplicity, yet a deep feel to the meaning of this poem. Nice job.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/15/2016 3:29:00 PM
Thank you, Becca.
Date: 6/13/2016 10:45:00 PM
What an excellent write...... Great........A.M.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/13/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi. Glad you enjoyed it! ...Fran
Date: 6/13/2016 2:55:00 PM
Nice one, Francis. I really enjoyed the read.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/13/2016 6:25:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. My attempt at a min word poem.