Francis J Grasso Poet Quatrain

New Beginning

willows weeping
white doves wail
wild wind blowing
black clouds sail

broken dreams
torn and tattered
tomorrows hopes now
trashed and shattered

dying love
don't give up
pray to god
and be tough


Written June 13, 2016

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Line Gauthier February 11, 2019 at 9:29 PM Bravo, Francis. Magical flow. A FAVE for me.

P.S. Awtry February 2, 2019 at 10:13 PM Very nice! Congratulations!

Beata Agustin February 2, 2019 at 12:55 AM Well-expressed sentiments. Congratulations. God bless you.

Susan Ashley February 1, 2019 at 10:13 PM Such deep thoughts and emotions expressed in beautiful brevity, Francis. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2019 at 5:57 PM Wonderful poem and win. Congratulations.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 1, 2019 at 9:14 AM Fantastic, succinct and pithy poem, congratulations on your silver medal finish Francis! xomo

Heidi Sands October 31, 2016 at 10:38 PM I like this one !

Sandra Haight October 6, 2016 at 4:12 PM So simple, but so inspirational, Francis. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra Francis J Grasso October 7, 2016 at 8:37 AM Thank you, Sandra. ...Fran

Skat A June 22, 2016 at 8:52 PM a lovely write.... SKAT Francis J Grasso June 22, 2016 at 10:04 PM Thanks, SKAT. Glad you liked it!

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2016 at 6:49 AM It may be minimal as you said to me down here, but it is great that way.

Becca Teagan June 15, 2016 at 2:02 PM I love the simplicity of the words, and the all lower case, no caps, adds to the simplicity, yet a deep feel to the meaning of this poem. Nice job. Francis J Grasso June 15, 2016 at 3:29 PM Thank you, Becca.

Afolabi Muideen June 13, 2016 at 10:45 PM What an excellent write...... Great........A.M. Francis J Grasso June 13, 2016 at 10:53 PM Thank you, Afolabi. Glad you enjoyed it! ...Fran

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2016 at 2:55 PM Nice one, Francis. I really enjoyed the read. Francis J Grasso June 13, 2016 at 6:25 PM Thanks, Andrea. My attempt at a min word poem.