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New Beginning

willows weeping white doves wail wild wind blowing black clouds sail broken dreams torn and tattered tomorrows hopes now trashed and shattered dying love don't give up pray to god and be tough Written June 13, 2016

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Date: 2/11/2019 9:29:00 PM
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Bravo, Francis. Magical flow. A FAVE for me.
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 2/2/2019 10:13:00 PM
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Very nice! Congratulations!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 2/2/2019 12:55:00 AM
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Well-expressed sentiments. Congratulations. God bless you.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/1/2019 10:13:00 PM
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Such deep thoughts and emotions expressed in beautiful brevity, Francis. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2019 5:57:00 PM
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Wonderful poem and win. Congratulations.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/1/2019 9:14:00 AM
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Fantastic, succinct and pithy poem, congratulations on your silver medal finish Francis! xomo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2016 10:38:00 PM
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I like this one !
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/6/2016 4:12:00 PM
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So simple, but so inspirational, Francis. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/7/2016 8:37:00 AM
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Thank you, Sandra. ...Fran
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Skat A
Date: 6/22/2016 8:52:00 PM
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a lovely write.... SKAT
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/22/2016 10:04:00 PM
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Thanks, SKAT. Glad you liked it!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/17/2016 6:49:00 AM
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It may be minimal as you said to me down here, but it is great that way.
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Becca Teagan
Date: 6/15/2016 2:02:00 PM
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I love the simplicity of the words, and the all lower case, no caps, adds to the simplicity, yet a deep feel to the meaning of this poem. Nice job.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/15/2016 3:29:00 PM
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Thank you, Becca.
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/13/2016 10:45:00 PM
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What an excellent write...... Great........A.M.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/13/2016 10:53:00 PM
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Thank you, Afolabi. Glad you enjoyed it! ...Fran
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/13/2016 2:55:00 PM
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Nice one, Francis. I really enjoyed the read.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/13/2016 6:25:00 PM
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Thanks, Andrea. My attempt at a min word poem.

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