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New Beginning

willows weeping white doves wail wild wind blowing black clouds sail broken dreams torn and tattered tomorrows hopes now trashed and shattered dying love don't give up pray to god and be tough Written June 13, 2016

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/11/2019 9:29:00 PM

Bravo, Francis. Magical flow. A FAVE for me.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/2/2019 10:13:00 PM

Very nice! Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/2/2019 12:55:00 AM

Well-expressed sentiments. Congratulations. God bless you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/1/2019 10:13:00 PM

Such deep thoughts and emotions expressed in beautiful brevity, Francis. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2019 5:57:00 PM

Wonderful poem and win. Congratulations.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/1/2019 9:14:00 AM

Fantastic, succinct and pithy poem, congratulations on your silver medal finish Francis! xomo

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/31/2016 10:38:00 PM

I like this one !

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/6/2016 4:12:00 PM

So simple, but so inspirational, Francis. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra

Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/7/2016 8:37:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra. ...Fran

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2016 8:52:00 PM

a lovely write.... SKAT

Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/22/2016 10:04:00 PM

Thanks, SKAT. Glad you liked it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2016 6:49:00 AM

It may be minimal as you said to me down here, but it is great that way.

Becca Teagan

Date: 6/15/2016 2:02:00 PM

I love the simplicity of the words, and the all lower case, no caps, adds to the simplicity, yet a deep feel to the meaning of this poem. Nice job.

Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/15/2016 3:29:00 PM

Thank you, Becca.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/13/2016 10:45:00 PM

What an excellent write...... Great........A.M.

Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/13/2016 10:53:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi. Glad you enjoyed it! ...Fran

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2016 2:55:00 PM

Nice one, Francis. I really enjoyed the read.

Francis J Grasso
Date: 6/13/2016 6:25:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. My attempt at a min word poem.