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Image result for birds in moonlight art

New Beginings

a young wing flutters
     warmer nights laved in moon beams
     spring's new soul takes flight


     03/01/2019
     Spring Haiku Contest
     Sponsored by Tania Kitchen

     2nd. Place

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Joan C. Fingon

Date: 4/24/2020 6:01:00 PM

A nice 5-7-5 haiku poem lots of images...

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/1/2020 6:31:00 PM

Thank You Joan...

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 3/21/2020 7:24:00 AM

My favorite season after autumn – a quick life and quick death, as it were. Thanks for the stop by, Charlie. / M

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 11:27:00 AM

Thanks Maurice...

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/22/2020 9:32:00 PM

WOW! I am charmed. Congrats to win.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 11:26:00 AM

Thanks Anisha...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/13/2019 7:48:00 AM

I can hardly wait!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 11:20:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Richard...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2019 12:39:00 PM

- A wonderful haiku, Charlie :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 11:19:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise...

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/15/2019 8:55:00 AM

'Tis Spring oh to be anywhere--outside, nice Charlie, Aloha wk

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 11:18:00 AM

Thanks William...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/5/2019 9:16:00 PM

Ah, Spring: The season when the soul takes wing. Beautifully imaged and phrased, Charlie. Best wishes, Gershon

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 11:12:00 AM

Thanks Gershon...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/12/2019 2:09:00 PM

This is a fave for me Charlie. Nature at its best! : ) xxoo

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/13/2019 6:09:00 AM

Thank you Connie...

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/5/2019 3:35:00 PM

Excellent Haiku

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2019 10:12:00 PM

Thank you Allen...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/3/2019 9:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your second placement Charlie. You venerate this season with a beautiful light! : ) xxoo

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2019 10:11:00 PM

Thank you Connie...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/29/2019 9:56:00 AM

Hello Charlie Smith, your oem is about Spring. I have enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/1/2019 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Darlene...

Judy Ball

Date: 3/28/2019 12:40:00 PM

Very nice Charlie. One of the beautiful things about Spring. All things are made new. Great job. God Bless, JB

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/1/2019 11:24:00 AM

Thank you Judy...

John Hamilton

Date: 3/19/2019 12:13:00 PM

Very nice Charlie, congrats!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/19/2019 12:14:00 PM

Thank you John...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/17/2019 3:03:00 AM

A wonderful haiku; loved the word choices that make it light, and dainty, soulful also, Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/18/2019 6:51:00 AM

Thank you Caren...

Paul Callus

Date: 3/16/2019 6:21:00 PM

Deserved congratulations, albeit belated, Charlie. An inspired haiku...love the end line, especially. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/18/2019 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Paul...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/16/2019 3:46:00 PM

here to send my sweet congrats, charlie... huggs

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/18/2019 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Nette...

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/16/2019 3:04:00 PM

Such a lovely picture in your outstanding poem, Charlie! Enjoyed :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2019 3:13:00 PM

Thank you Laura...

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/14/2019 4:31:00 PM

Wow, so glad to read this gem, Charlie,,truly a classic Haiku

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2019 1:59:00 PM

Thank you Harry...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/13/2019 12:05:00 PM

You uplift my soul with they beautiful promising haiku, xo

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2019 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Pixie...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2019 10:23:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your Haiku this morning. I wonder if any of the nesting birds here have babies ready to take flight yet? Sara..Thanks for dropping by.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2019 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Sara...