Charlie Smith Poet Haiku

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New Beginings

a young wing flutters
     warmer nights laved in moon beams
     spring's new soul takes flight


     03/01/2019
     Spring Haiku Contest
     Sponsored by Tania Kitchen

     2nd. Place

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Joan C. Fingon April 24, 2020 at 6:01 PM A nice 5-7-5 haiku poem lots of images... Charlie Smith November 1, 2020 at 6:31 PM Thank You Joan...

Maurice Rigoler March 21, 2020 at 7:24 AM My favorite season after autumn – a quick life and quick death, as it were. Thanks for the stop by, Charlie. / M Charlie Smith March 21, 2020 at 11:27 AM Thanks Maurice...

Anisha Dutta January 22, 2020 at 9:32 PM WOW! I am charmed. Congrats to win. Charlie Smith March 21, 2020 at 11:26 AM Thanks Anisha...

Richard Lamoureux November 13, 2019 at 7:48 AM I can hardly wait! Charlie Smith March 21, 2020 at 11:20 AM Thanks for the visit Richard...

Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2019 at 12:39 PM - A wonderful haiku, Charlie :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Charlie Smith March 21, 2020 at 11:19 AM Thanks Anne-Lise...

William Kelii Kekaula May 15, 2019 at 8:55 AM 'Tis Spring oh to be anywhere--outside, nice Charlie, Aloha wk Charlie Smith March 21, 2020 at 11:18 AM Thanks William...

Gershon Wolf May 5, 2019 at 9:16 PM Ah, Spring: The season when the soul takes wing. Beautifully imaged and phrased, Charlie. Best wishes, Gershon Charlie Smith March 21, 2020 at 11:12 AM Thanks Gershon...

Connie Marcum Wong April 12, 2019 at 2:09 PM This is a fave for me Charlie. Nature at its best! : ) xxoo Charlie Smith April 13, 2019 at 6:09 AM Thank you Connie...

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 5, 2019 at 3:35 PM Excellent Haiku Charlie Smith April 5, 2019 at 10:12 PM Thank you Allen...

Connie Marcum Wong April 3, 2019 at 9:59 PM Congratulations on your second placement Charlie. You venerate this season with a beautiful light! : ) xxoo Charlie Smith April 5, 2019 at 10:11 PM Thank you Connie...

Darlene De Beaulieu March 29, 2019 at 9:56 AM Hello Charlie Smith, your oem is about Spring. I have enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend. Charlie Smith April 1, 2019 at 11:23 AM Thank you Darlene...

Judy Ball March 28, 2019 at 12:40 PM Very nice Charlie. One of the beautiful things about Spring. All things are made new. Great job. God Bless, JB Charlie Smith April 1, 2019 at 11:24 AM Thank you Judy...

John Hamilton March 19, 2019 at 12:13 PM Very nice Charlie, congrats! Charlie Smith March 19, 2019 at 12:14 PM Thank you John...

Caren Krutsinger March 17, 2019 at 3:03 AM A wonderful haiku; loved the word choices that make it light, and dainty, soulful also, Charlie. Charlie Smith March 18, 2019 at 6:51 AM Thank you Caren...

Paul Callus March 16, 2019 at 6:21 PM Deserved congratulations, albeit belated, Charlie. An inspired haiku...love the end line, especially. Regards // paul Charlie Smith March 18, 2019 at 6:50 AM Thank you Paul...

Nette Onclaud March 16, 2019 at 3:46 PM here to send my sweet congrats, charlie... huggs Charlie Smith March 18, 2019 at 6:49 AM Thank you Nette...

Laura Leiser March 16, 2019 at 3:04 PM Such a lovely picture in your outstanding poem, Charlie! Enjoyed :) Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 3:13 PM Thank you Laura...

Harry Horsman March 14, 2019 at 4:31 PM Wow, so glad to read this gem, Charlie,,truly a classic Haiku Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 1:59 PM Thank you Harry...

Mystic Rose Rose March 13, 2019 at 12:05 PM You uplift my soul with they beautiful promising haiku, xo Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 1:57 PM Thank you Pixie...

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2019 at 10:23 AM Enjoyed reading your Haiku this morning. I wonder if any of the nesting birds here have babies ready to take flight yet? Sara..Thanks for dropping by. Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 1:54 PM Thank you Sara...

Ravi Sathasivam March 13, 2019 at 1:56 AM Excellent haiku and well penned. Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 1:52 PM Thank you Ravi...

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2019 at 6:48 PM congrats again. I am rushed right now and don't notice a new post from you. Hope to see one soon. Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 1:50 PM You will, thanks Andrea...

Janice Canerdy March 12, 2019 at 4:56 PM Excellent, Charlie! Janice Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 1:47 PM Thanks Janice...

Constance La France March 12, 2019 at 4:03 PM Charlie, this is beautiful, I love the first line ~ Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 1:44 PM Thank you Dear One...

Nette Onclaud March 12, 2019 at 1:52 PM remarkably scribed with a fine win, charlie... congrats!...huggs Charlie Smith March 16, 2019 at 1:42 PM Thank you Nette...

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