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a young wing flutters warmer nights laved in moon beams spring's new soul takes flight 03/01/2019 Spring Haiku Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchen 2nd. Place

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Date: 4/24/2020 6:01:00 PM
A nice 5-7-5 haiku poem lots of images...
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Date: 3/21/2020 7:24:00 AM
My favorite season after autumn – a quick life and quick death, as it were. Thanks for the stop by, Charlie. / M
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Date: 3/21/2020 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Maurice...
Date: 1/22/2020 9:32:00 PM
WOW! I am charmed. Congrats to win.
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Date: 3/21/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thanks Anisha...
Date: 11/13/2019 7:48:00 AM
I can hardly wait!
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Date: 3/21/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Richard...
Date: 8/10/2019 12:39:00 PM
- A wonderful haiku, Charlie :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/21/2020 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise...
Date: 5/15/2019 8:55:00 AM
'Tis Spring oh to be anywhere--outside, nice Charlie, Aloha wk
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Date: 3/21/2020 11:18:00 AM
Thanks William...
Date: 5/5/2019 9:16:00 PM
Ah, Spring: The season when the soul takes wing. Beautifully imaged and phrased, Charlie. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 3/21/2020 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Gershon...
Date: 4/12/2019 2:09:00 PM
This is a fave for me Charlie. Nature at its best! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/13/2019 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 4/5/2019 3:35:00 PM
Excellent Haiku
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Date: 4/5/2019 10:12:00 PM
Thank you Allen...
Date: 4/3/2019 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your second placement Charlie. You venerate this season with a beautiful light! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/5/2019 10:11:00 PM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 3/29/2019 9:56:00 AM
Hello Charlie Smith, your oem is about Spring. I have enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 4/1/2019 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Date: 3/28/2019 12:40:00 PM
Very nice Charlie. One of the beautiful things about Spring. All things are made new. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/1/2019 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Judy...
Date: 3/19/2019 12:13:00 PM
Very nice Charlie, congrats!
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Date: 3/19/2019 12:14:00 PM
Thank you John...
Date: 3/17/2019 3:03:00 AM
A wonderful haiku; loved the word choices that make it light, and dainty, soulful also, Charlie.
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Date: 3/18/2019 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Caren...
Date: 3/16/2019 6:21:00 PM
Deserved congratulations, albeit belated, Charlie. An inspired haiku...love the end line, especially. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/18/2019 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Paul...
Date: 3/16/2019 3:46:00 PM
here to send my sweet congrats, charlie... huggs
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Date: 3/18/2019 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Nette...
Date: 3/16/2019 3:04:00 PM
Such a lovely picture in your outstanding poem, Charlie! Enjoyed :)
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Date: 3/16/2019 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Laura...
Date: 3/14/2019 4:31:00 PM
Wow, so glad to read this gem, Charlie,,truly a classic Haiku
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Harry...
Date: 3/13/2019 12:05:00 PM
You uplift my soul with they beautiful promising haiku, xo
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:57:00 PM
Thank you Pixie...
Date: 3/13/2019 10:23:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your Haiku this morning. I wonder if any of the nesting birds here have babies ready to take flight yet? Sara..Thanks for dropping by.
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Sara...
Date: 3/13/2019 1:56:00 AM
Excellent haiku and well penned.
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Ravi...
Date: 3/12/2019 6:48:00 PM
congrats again. I am rushed right now and don't notice a new post from you. Hope to see one soon.
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:50:00 PM
You will, thanks Andrea...
Date: 3/12/2019 4:56:00 PM
Excellent, Charlie! Janice
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Janice...
Date: 3/12/2019 4:03:00 PM
Charlie, this is beautiful, I love the first line ~
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Dear One...
Date: 3/12/2019 1:52:00 PM
remarkably scribed with a fine win, charlie... congrats!...huggs
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Nette...
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