New Age Troubled Ways

This is only the beginning i say 
as i lay stone to build a 
foundation
To rise our empire
And lift our entire nation
Turn off the world and use your 
imagination
And listen to the shadowy voice 
of reason
Am I the only spark yearning to 
ignite change
This isn't a poem or a rap, no 
where on the vocal range
No where on the map but I tell 
you this fights staged
Realizing the same **** ends up 
on the front page
Why are we so enveloped with 
crazy and deranged 
Why can't we get past our 
materialistic selfish ways
See man down and our society 
leaves him where he lays
Nobody needs a handout 
except those who can afford to 
pay
Along with those who work the 
system and sit on their ass all 
day
Contributing to nothing leaving 
no responsibility to be had
The way I see it this system is 
a dead beat dad
Who doesn't acknowledge he 
has a child 
Unless the child can support 
him and it makes the child 
mad,
Then the child acts up and they 
say he's being bad
So they put him in time out and 
make the other children hand 
over their lunches
But when the child is hurt he 
has to mend his own crutches
When the child is sick he has 
buy his own medicine
And dads nowhere around to 
give discipline 
Clearly dad don't care
Clearly something is wrong 
here
I'm talkin to walls cuz I swear 
to god I see them breathin
That rust stain I thought was 
were blood was seepin
 My world is alive but why is it 
dieing
Am I the reason or am I just 
surviving
While this place perishes 
And I find myself crying
Are we not trying
To save ourselves from 
drowning or are we to busy 
individually to notice our 
surroundings
Living day to day as if there's 
no reason to pray for tomorrow
We've been numbed to the pain 
and sorrow
By blindly passing by the 
coldest of hollows
Disregarding compassion in 
exchange for self growth
Coincides with leaving the rest 
with no hope
When there's nothing left to 
whom you gonna gloat
When the lake is dry how the 
hell you gonna float
This is only the beginning I say 
as I paddle the first stroke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 25, 2013 at 11:07 AM
Justin, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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May 15, 2013 at 8:17 AM
What an exceptional poem Justin. It really got me thinking... so true... so sad. Love your format and use of analogy's. Keep posting... you have talent.
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