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Come to me
Now my dear
Bride to be


Nothing to fear
Early love balloons 
Year after year

Birth hummed tunes
When we’re free
Our garden blooms.

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Marikate Kingston

August 22, 2026 at 8:49 PM

Your poem would be wonderful for a man to give the woman he wanted to marry, in a garden of roses.The clouds would part ,letting warmth and light surround his verse to her

Eileen Manassian

May 13, 2024 at 8:45 PM

Awwwww... blooming gardens. So much can be understood from those two words. Lovely. Thanks for your visit to me poem. Richard, I also love people. Have no fear...I haven't gone off the deep end quite yet.

Richard Lamoureux

May 13, 2024 at 10:11 PM

I have no doubt you love people. Hugs Rick.

Beryl Edmonds

May 10, 2024 at 7:23 PM

Delightful poetry Richard, lovey dovey romantico… Beryl

Richard Lamoureux

May 13, 2024 at 10:10 PM

Thanks Beryl.

Hilda Greenhough

May 9, 2024 at 4:23 PM

The serene romanticism of this poem hugs to the heart. I enjoy the eternal spoken joy.

Richard Lamoureux

May 9, 2024 at 5:01 PM

Thanks so much.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

May 9, 2024 at 8:47 AM

Hello Richard, What a beautiful love poem! Repeating "year after year" creates a sense of timeless love. "Early love balloons" is such a sweet image, and the final line, "Our garden blooms," perfectly captures the growth and joy of your love. - Blessings, Daniel

Richard Lamoureux

May 9, 2024 at 5:02 PM

Thanks for your poignant comment.

Jan Allison

May 8, 2024 at 2:36 PM

what a sweet romantic poem Rick:-) hope you and your 'sweetie' are well:-) I so miss my correspondence with mama bear she was such a lovely lady:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

May 9, 2024 at 6:18 AM

I miss her too. Especially at this time of year, with Mother’s Day, her birthday and the time of her passing. Thanks for the hug and visit.