Never Would Have Said Goodbye

i cant believe i let you go i wish i would have said good bye then maybe we would have never said goodbye 
there where things about each other we didn't know but when you saw me you saw me glow i remember the 
day we said hello you thought you where so cute and you let it show then you said you liked me a lot and said 
me and you hey why not you would hold my hand and kiss my  cheek you made me feel as if i couldn't speak 
we talked a lot and then it stopped how did it happen how did it stop i didn't know you very well but now that i 
dont have you im stuck in hell then the day came i looked at you and walked away and now nothing is the same 
i still cant look you in the eyes it hurts to much you'll make me cry i wish you  new how i felt but you never will 
maybe if you did you could help maybe if you new how i felt i wouldn't be as broken i was lucky to have you 
ony for a while if only for a while you didn't know me very well but i barley new my self maybe if i didn't look at 
you and walk away things would be better today i dont know if you feel the same way but when i was with you 
my pain went away i was thinking of you and your arms around me not the hurt and the pain that sourounded 
me maybe if i said sothing the day i walked away you would have been here with me to stay but it didnt happen 
that way when i look at you today i dont know what to say i guess it was my fault that you didnt stay i wish i 
would have said goodbye then maybe we would have never said goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/28/2010 6:18:00 PM
I enjoyed the narrative. A good write
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