Never To Undue

Silent, the memory pondered
of love, that it once knew
A cherished time, a love squandered
Heartbreak, never to undue

The tears that fell, spilled upon a dream
Down a face of regrets
Fragility of self-esteem
Emptiness it begets




9/2/19
contest writing challenge 1, September 2019-eight line form
sponsor Dear Heart-Wiishkobi Ode
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La France Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 11:39 AM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent Rhyme poem. It is beautifully penned and I love the video too.
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September 12, 2019 at 1:10 PM
- Frederic congratulations on your touching and beautiful winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 5:03 PM
Succinctly poignant!! Congrats on your win.
Chiri Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Oh wow this was amazing!;) congrats on your win!;)
Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Loved this Frederic, the Gypsy Kings always great, intense video matches well with your write, love squandered ends badly for all!
Sands Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 7:21 PM
I can feel this one. It flows well too. Well written :)
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