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Never To Undue

Silent, the memory pondered of love, that it once knew A cherished time, a love squandered Heartbreak, never to undue The tears that fell, spilled upon a dream Down a face of regrets Fragility of self-esteem Emptiness it begets 9/2/19 contest writing challenge 1, September 2019-eight line form sponsor Dear Heart-Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/16/2019 11:39:00 AM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent Rhyme poem. It is beautifully penned and I love the video too.
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Date: 9/12/2019 1:10:00 PM
- Frederic congratulations on your touching and beautiful winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2019 5:03:00 PM
Succinctly poignant!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/10/2019 12:19:00 PM
Oh wow this was amazing!;) congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 9/5/2019 9:41:00 AM
Loved this Frederic, the Gypsy Kings always great, intense video matches well with your write, love squandered ends badly for all!
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Date: 9/4/2019 7:21:00 PM
I can feel this one. It flows well too. Well written :)
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