Never Think Twice

Like fire we rise 'pon the breath of the dawn.
Eager and burning, our futures unclear.
Valiant as the lion, tender as the fawn.
Unpredictable embers with passions so near!

Yet, time is a line we are doomed to traverse.
We find ourselves marching melancholy roads,
flanked by bright crystal and hailed by verse,
still, the end is apparent; see? There it abodes.

At last comes the gloaming, the fire chokes out.
We fed on our ashes until they were gone.
Our bodies are frosted, there can be no doubt:
Rich pathos- our plead can never go on.

Forevermore, then, in our palace of ice.
We will lie, in the darkness, and never think twice.

9 August 2017

Written for "Eight Word Challenge-3" contest, sponsored by John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wood Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 12:18 PM
A beautiful sonnet J. I. Congratulations on your win. -- Dean
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August 20, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Yours was great too! Thanks
May Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Great write amd win...Congrats
F. Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Thanks; I really enjoyed your take on it!
Ashley Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:07 PM
An amazing write J. I. Congratulations on your 2nd place win! :)
F. Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Thanks!
Hamilton Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Wow I don't know you and this is the first time I've read you, this is stunning writing worthy of 2nd place, now I've got you on my radar will be reading more!
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August 19, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Perhaps not the first time you've read me, but the first time I've arranged my name as such :) I always enjoy your contests and am often surprised by the quality of the products that result from them!
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