Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Never the Same

A Rainbow dark and grey...
                                         Left weathered and frayed...
                                         Not a spot of sunshine today...
                                       Bright colors that lost their way...
                                          With a brush in hand I paint...
                             From a soul that's more a sinner than a saint...
                                    A Rainbow brought back to life again...
                                          But will it ever be the same?...

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Chris Lane August 19, 2012 at 10:07 PM Interesting piece! Thanks

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 10:24 AM I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Michael. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi August 8, 2012 at 12:04 AM As long as your intention is good, no matter how bad u are, u'll bring up something good.. Nicely penned, Michael. :)

Poet Destroyer A August 5, 2012 at 11:22 PM Michael, i'm gonna see the pretty side of your thought. sometimes sunshine runs out for good reasons. We all know rainbows are proof of something great to come. A change of colors can be a good path. You got to admit change is in your control. Does it really matter if things are not the same. You hold the key & paint brush 2 the new rainbow. now take control of the colors, and paint away. Only you can paint the way the same. maybe this new rainbow is for the better. Once the grey is gone~PD

Anne-Lise Andresen August 5, 2012 at 2:06 PM Michael, there is a new day tomorrow. Perhaps the rainbow is full of beautiful colors tomorrow. - Very well written, sense sad in your lines. - oxox big hug to you // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey August 5, 2012 at 11:28 AM I believe that in time the rainbow can make it back to where it was at one time! We all have that chance! It might just take some time and some really good paint too! This is a grandiose write my friend! I love how you wrote this, it is very brilliant and the colors can come back! Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 5, 2012 at 11:09 AM Does it have to be the same? nice one Michael xx

Wilma Neels August 5, 2012 at 10:35 AM It doesn't have to be the same, somehow the similarities will filter through and sometimes when things change we get better at handling them.. In my opinion a chance to grow? I love this introspective write MJF, there is so many ways to look at it :) love it mr. non flirt :) love & hugs CTH

David Williams August 5, 2012 at 8:59 AM Michael I think the image of a 'dark and grey' rainbow is teriffic, love that...Dave