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Never Slouch As Drippier Drop a Slipper

~`T was in Disney land, Walt Disney’s grand, Cinderella, rags to riches, met her charming prince. She did not lose her shoe, but she threw, there out of the blue, to divine prince her shoe. ~What is apples to oranges, her ugly sisters knew, though what could they do, they knew she threw her shoe? Cinderella had a hand, was her plan there in Disney land, for all hopes get complete, by faith in virtue sweet. All odds were beat, of this rags to riches story so sweet, Ugliness is never bliss, will never learn from true love’s kiss. `Tis where Linda Marie, a child at heart, first got her start, in this Cinderella part, and the trust we see, in her poetry! She is no slouch nor drippier, of worship you will never strip her, Cinderella met this fellow, from thence you will never quell her. Take a note, never gloat, drop you slipper, do not slouch as drippier. This be how “Sweetheart of Poetry Soup” remains so chipper! You will never flip her, she knows how to drop proverbial slipper, All ugly sisters, slouch of drippiers, have not famous slippers. A beauty of teaching apparent, in Walt’s fairy land of fate. Love’s affections, Cinderella’s gait, by it Linda found a soul mate. For and in honor of Linda Marie And contest: Disney By John Moses Freeman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/16/2011 8:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Ralph
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Date: 8/16/2011 1:47:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, John : )
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:38:00 AM
Well what a unique spin you put in here John, incorporating Linda :) that was cute :) Super congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Disney" contest Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 3:05:00 AM
hey john congrats on your win, great poem, David
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Date: 8/16/2011 12:32:00 AM
Wow Moses, this is so fine a piece. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/15/2011 7:27:00 PM
Congrats Moses on second place win ..in my contest.. excellent piece luv..
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Date: 7/28/2011 1:47:00 PM
Interesting work..Good luck in the contest..I will have to check the contest out..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Thanks for choosing my work to place in your contest..I am honored..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:42:00 PM
sweetness, moe.. thanks for appreciating my piece in your recently concluded contest; so grateful.. i bet this piece of yours will be a topper! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/25/2011 4:06:00 PM
Always did love the Cinderella story, John and your poem would have made Walt Disney proud. I'm sure this will take a first place in the contest. Love, carolyn
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Date: 7/24/2011 6:08:00 PM
Nice choice of the character, John
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Date: 7/24/2011 2:08:00 PM
excellent. good luck, David
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Date: 7/24/2011 12:55:00 PM
Awesome write mate...right on.....she is so sweet it is simply amazing I agree......God bless......Old Jack
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