Laura Mckenzie Poet Sonnet

Never Shall My Heart Wander

Tomorrow will come and I shall remember your smile 
Where the stars set so fine on an evening so worthwhile
Sweet sounds of voices lingering soft and free
With the strains of his hair he had eyes of the sea

He told me tales and rested my head apon his shoulder 
Engrossed in woven bed sheets to keep us from getting colder
His kisses of sweetness conformed and moist 
His words more dashing than I’d ever heard him voice

Two bodies magically worship and caressing in trust 
Were bellowed winds of ecstasy blustered into lust
We spun slowly downward into the eyes of a sway 
Where nothing around us could draw us away
  
Now this moment in time this journey of our minds 
Shall reoccur in the depths of hearts passionately entwined

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C. E. Mcmullin February 15, 2009 at 4:08 PM Well writtten sonnet of love, a very difficult subject to write about, without sounding mushy or trite or over blown. Kudos, Laura! poet butterfly

Mary Duhart January 31, 2009 at 5:42 PM Very heartfelt and touching. Made the heart flutter. Very passionly conveyed. Continue to share

John Heck January 30, 2009 at 3:31 PM Romantic and touching. This poem sings like a soft lovesong. Hope all is well with you. Have a great weekend. Peace and hugs, J.

Michael Degenhardt January 30, 2009 at 8:56 AM The form, being a difficult one, was mastered here. It reads with beauty of words and images with the softes tone. Lovely. Michael

Valerie Bellefleur January 28, 2009 at 3:07 PM very romantic - a wonderful tribute of love.

Sharon Winter January 28, 2009 at 5:46 AM Oh Laura, this is simply divine! Passionate and so well written. Love is such a beautiful thing. Sigh. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds January 28, 2009 at 2:18 AM Beautiful, passionate write, Laura, well done, and good luck! Love, Kristin

John Rhinem January 28, 2009 at 12:19 AM Smile-"Beautiful Precious and Gifted Laura Mckenzie!!!"-What a wonderfully deep and vivid write of passion and love here dear lady--I loved Your last stanza-Smile-it left this open air of possibility? That this loves genesis began in the heart-perhaps from afar-and still journies, within the mind of them both?...Smile.... that was just a thought dear!? And this entire write, was so beautiful, warm and tender-a reflection of "Your Heart!"-"My Love To You Always Dear, John!":)

Brian Strand January 27, 2009 at 11:31 PM Thank you for supporting my contest Laura.Rgds brian

Christopher Higgins January 27, 2009 at 2:38 PM Beautiful write filled with love and passion. I love the longing that i read in the piece..the longing never to end the memory of a moment that was fulfilling. Great write...Thanks for your comments on my work.