Never Only Yours

Carry the weight of the world
you, a sharecropper in lonesome field
plowing along in the expanse
hoping and praying your daily yield.

'It's too much to bear, it isn't fair' 
restful thoughts heard you say
'please, take it away!'

Was never yours, 
the long, windswept rows
you planted, they watched 
as your crop grew..

They were always there
an ancestral lot, yours 
bound to them 
and them to you.

Your heavy burden, 
does it feel lighter? Rejoice,
for they carry it 
for you 
now. 

They always will, 
and they always,
have. (I vow)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 8/23/2023 6:46:00 AM
The writing was excellent. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. It was meaningful and lovely. Thanks for your kind words on my page
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:06:00 AM
A very meaningful and lovely poem Quoth…..really enjoyed! Debx
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/16/2023 6:54:00 PM
Hi Deb, Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. May all your ancestors treat you kind. -Richard
Date: 8/15/2023 12:37:00 PM
what a great message in this poem. I was thinking maybe it was one of the unusual forms for contests going on, but it looks like you wrote a regular free verse.
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Date: 8/16/2023 6:53:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you, still trying to find some time for contests. Still learning. -Richard
Date: 8/13/2023 1:50:00 PM
I have tried to plow a straight row behind a plow. with my Grandfather watching. So this poem means much to me. And it says you have experinced the same thing.
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/16/2023 6:51:00 PM
TS, Thanks, your comment means as much to me. The Amish farmers always seem to plow the straightest rows. -Richard
Date: 8/12/2023 11:28:00 AM
A nice poem Richard. I felt like I was there. It is quite freeing at the end too. :)
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/12/2023 5:33:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Glad you liked it. This poem came from thoughts on a quiet evening. Are we all alone in this world or is someone watching over. Not only by faith and theological beliefs, but our blood relatives and ancestors. Prayers for the town of Lahaina, Hawaii and for those that lost something/someone/everything. -Richard
Date: 8/12/2023 6:13:00 AM
Hey Richard, been a while. Interesting little ditty on a sharecropper life
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Date: 8/13/2023 2:59:00 PM
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/12/2023 5:33:00 PM
Hi Tom, Thanks for stopping by. Sharecropping; hard work in the best of times even with good weather. Have you read John Grisham's novel 'A Painted House'? -Richard
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