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Never Meant

you belong to him loving what I cannot have hurts so beautiful

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/21/2013 6:19:00 PM

three lines full of impact, well worded, I think we can all relate to this...

Michael Ainsley

Date: 5/18/2013 8:32:00 PM

We have all played The Great Gatsby haven't we! Rich or poor we have reached for love that wasn't there because of this or that And suffered for being asleep in the middle of our lives. Enjoyed your telling of a long story in so few words. Thats poetry . Feel better with every sunrise Tim. Keep writing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2013 12:35:00 AM

hurts so beautiful is even better than hurts so good! This is very nice. And a question for you, why is Debs calling you Cher? Are you related to Bono? heehee

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/9/2013 7:42:00 PM

It was so nice to hear from you cher, keep up the good work, Light & Love

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/9/2013 4:53:00 PM

very intriguing - the last line is mysterious and perfect...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/9/2013 10:45:00 AM

Oh...this is sad and beautiful at the same time! Lovely write, my dear.