Never Meant

you belong to him
loving what I cannot have
hurts so beautiful
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Puddifoot Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 6:19 PM
three lines full of impact, well worded, I think we can all relate to this...
Ainsley Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:32 PM
We have all played The Great Gatsby haven't we! Rich or poor we have reached for love that wasn't there because of this or that And suffered for being asleep in the middle of our lives. Enjoyed your telling of a long story in so few words. Thats poetry . Feel better with every sunrise Tim. Keep writing.
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 12:35 AM
hurts so beautiful is even better than hurts so good! This is very nice. And a question for you, why is Debs calling you Cher? Are you related to Bono? heehee
Guzzi Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 7:42 PM
It was so nice to hear from you cher, keep up the good work, Light & Love
Bauer Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 4:53 PM
very intriguing - the last line is mysterious and perfect...
Manassian Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Oh...this is sad and beautiful at the same time! Lovely write, my dear.
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