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Never Love Again

Sometimes I wonder if love is truth
The error of my ways in my youth
The price of love is too steep a toll
You give your heart. They take your soul
They say when love is on the wing
You can hear the bluebirds sing
Love can take away your breath
But then again, so can death
I’ll never answer love’s deceitful call
They build you up to watch you fall
Letter’s written with poisoned pen
I will never love again
On our knees for love we plead
Love arrives to watch us bleed
Nothing grows without the rain
The cost of love is undying pain
Trapped inside this lion’s den
I will never love again.


fictional-- for Sami's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/4/2012 12:24:00 AM
I can feel a soul tortured by loves' pleasure, and loves' pain here. Well crafted. - Chuck
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:08:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 5/11/2009 2:18:00 PM
This is just wonderful all the way through and although this poem is fictional, you speak so elegantly as if you had the experiece , the pain. Remarkable your words through this finely tuned piece of art!
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Date: 4/21/2009 8:21:00 AM
aww I like it its beautiful.. and thanks for the comment.. hehe
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Date: 4/3/2009 3:37:00 AM
Vince, this is a very nice poem though it is fictional. Keep on sharing. Ernilando
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:50:00 AM
Great writing, it seemed so believeable until you said it was fiction, of course. Thank goodness your are not seeing real love this way. I love the "poison pen" that is an awesome touch. Good luck in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/1/2009 4:00:00 AM
"letters written with poisoned pen, I will never love again" I was gripped by these 2 lines. I very much like this poem. And I am very relieved that it is unreal. ~ Andrea Bianca Reyes
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Date: 3/31/2009 3:04:00 AM
Aaaaww this is such a sad write, it makes you want to reach out to the writer....Well done, very effective!!
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:42:00 AM
Wow, Vince, this is a beautiful poem. I'm glad it's fictional! This one's going into my faves. Good luck in the contest. *****Danielle******
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Date: 3/30/2009 10:31:00 PM
Never love again, Vince? I can't say that about myself with certainty...especially if a gorgeous chick comes into view, then I act like a lovestruck teenager again, ha ha. Jest aside, this is well written and full of philosophical undertone, with smooth, unlabored rhyming. Reminds me so much of the old Nazareth/Everly Brothers song 'Love Hurts'. Very well done, Admiral. Fred
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:39:00 PM
Wow very deep in feeling and I felt your hurt Love is something we desire yet if it is not true it bites us hard! Great poem I love the flow Vince I wish you good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:23:00 PM
You are so good, you have some of us fooled! This is truly excellent Vince, but I would expect nothing less. A winning poem. Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:51:00 PM
Wow....cynical but fantastic poem for the contest! Glad you said "fictional"...and glad true love for you really doesn't seem so grim :) Great job, Vince!!
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Date: 3/30/2009 11:01:00 AM
Vince !! , you ole romantic Seadog , as only you can write them ..... Super line ; " But then again , so can death .... Brilliant !!! ..
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Date: 3/30/2009 10:32:00 AM
I must agree with Christopher on finding love again, even when we have given up hope. It happened to me; it can happen to you. "Love can take away your breath But then again, so can death" is a powerful and sadly true statement, Vince. Very profound perspective on love's pain.
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Date: 3/30/2009 10:25:00 AM
I would like to think we can love again even after all the pain..love the line, the cost of love is undying pain...wonderful writing Vince.
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