Never Letting Go

Baby Sent me free i cant take this pain anymore
you can see all the tears fallen down my face 
like water fall. i'm walking away from the pain
and hurt in my life  baby you got me all wrong
im not getting any younger i just getting old
be careful what you wish for might just get it all
when i think my self at nights getting shorter and
wake up in morning sun hits your face days getting
longer 
time pass by you getting old
last time you can see your baby face
all when i look in your eyes i dreaming of your
face i think about all the time dream  at midnight
because its only me and you
the days keep changing people say goodbye or say Hello
i hope this life get better as time goes 
one chance one breathe one life one kiss one love
as i go sleep holding on to my pillow looking out window 
at the stars i keep breathe because i know not to let go
and im not going let you go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/10/2012 12:34:00 PM
very open feelings my friend,i think you are a very good poet ,
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Date: 8/9/2012 5:44:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Sky. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 3:29:00 PM
Let him read this work of art of yours!! He should understand where you're coming from...enjoyed!! INK-U-SCRIPT
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