Never Land of Indulgence Revised Version

Oh if i had the wings of an eagle
i would swoon to pick you up
and take you to a place
i call never land
where passion is the beverage
that  parched lips taste
where scorching love cascade
never are your desires gratified 100%
they are continually foraged
upon the bed of elation
diminish burdens and be uninhibited 
let go of all your encumbrances
let me my love liberate your mind and soul
as i take you on a fervent journey
that will tantalize your very essence
and trigger an excruciating nostalgia
that only can be pacified by I
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bello Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 6:36 PM
"where passion is the beverage, that parched lips taste" :O!!!! beautifully written! IM looking forward to reading more work like this
Mitchell Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:12 PM
there are more go to writers-network.com!
Mitchell Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 5:20 PM
well thanks but i'm shifting to uplifting!lol but thanks for the review
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