Never Gonna Stop

I'm lost, in empty hallways, with no way to go,
I'm endangered, and my legacy lives through the way that I flow,
But I'm not intimidated, the more you tell me to stop, the faster I'll go,
My heart has frozen over, so no emotion is what I'll show

If the streets were as deep as the ocean, then I would drown in disgrace,
My words, are the Titanic, breaking the structure, of my paper and drowning my sorrow away,
I'm not dreaming, I'm succeeding, because reality is fake,
And the future is getting closer, I taste of it everyday

I live for the feeling, that I get when I got my hand on a pen,
And all the pent up thoughts, are released when I leak the ink that's within,
But through all the rythm and the beats, that I hear all the time,
Nothing beats the feeling when I expose through a ryhme

So I'm gonna put together syllables until my brain goes dead,
Or until I'm riding in a hearse because of the things I said,
I'm gonna climb this mountain, nothing can make me stop,
because the reality of it is, my resting place is at the top

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/19/2013 2:00:00 AM
I know it may seem like I say similar things each time I comment on one of your amazing pieces, but I'm honestly running out of ways to describe your works accurately. Inspiring, heartfelt, motivational, well-crafted, metaphorical... it's just AWEsome to get glimpses inside that little head of yours... keep going strong, my friend!
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Date: 2/27/2013 12:55:00 PM
Aaron, glad nothing will make you stop..good going poem...pd
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Date: 2/27/2013 1:44:00 AM
Aaron way to go....David
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Date: 2/26/2013 11:35:00 PM
My words, are the Titanic, breaking the structure, of my paper and drowning my sorrow away, Awesome buddy. Your pen follows ur heart.
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