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Never Going To Drag Me Down

I’ve been bruised and b a t t e r e d all over this forsaken town, there’s one thing for sure, NOTHING IS GOING TO DRAG ME DOWN. When the darkness prevailed and the obscurity arrived, is when I’d never been more g r a t e f u l to be alive. I shivered in regret and remorse called my name, I thought my life would end and never be the same. I was left out to dry in the rain last these last seven years, things that brought s o r r o w, blame and tears. The grim and dreary days raced through me like a ghost, but the l i g h t shined through me when I needed it most. I forgave myself and forgot all my wrongful sins, and found the majesty of f a i t h hidden deep within. I was conflicted and addicted to shame and torment, now I see the g o o d, all the fear is dormant. Freedom has called my name and I’m no longer chained, for I have found r e d e m p t i o n as the darkness has refrained. My happiness is contingent upon my c o m p a s s i o n and hope, nothing will ever get in the way of me trying to cope. The Lord has been my light and my s a l v a t i o n, and now I am grateful for my life’s great creation. My laughter has replaced that awful dreaded frown--- I v o w e d to myself… NOTHING IS EVER GOING TO DRAG ME DOWN! Never Going to Drag Me Down Contest October 15, 2017

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Date: 11/20/2017 12:58:00 PM
You go girl! Got poetry to back you up! Nicely put together.
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Date: 11/8/2017 7:34:00 PM
Nice, very encouraging.
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Date: 11/6/2017 1:43:00 AM
What a beautifully crafted poem, Laura...so forcefully eloquent. The poem flows from verse to verse with much pleasing cadence - a most worthy write! My warmest regards. :) john
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Date: 10/22/2017 8:41:00 PM
Laura, this a great poem. Don't let anything get you down. The lord is your light. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/21/2017 10:19:00 AM
Such a beautifully upbeat poem Laura. I love the smoothness of the read and the way you guided the reader by the use of your unique layout.
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Date: 10/17/2017 11:38:00 PM
Very nicely done, Laura - kudos and cheers on your well-deserved win, dear poet - keep writing strong! :-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/19/2017 8:04:00 AM
thank you for all your kind words dear greg :) Be blessed!
Date: 10/15/2017 8:57:00 PM
Another definite fave for me. Excellent.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/19/2017 8:04:00 AM
aww thank you sweet Line, be blessed :)
Date: 10/15/2017 10:47:00 AM
Just wonderful! A very favorite for me.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/19/2017 8:03:00 AM
many thanks sweetest girl :)

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