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"Somewhere, I read a poet must suffer to be good. Well I have, and then some! And I think unless a poet has experienced great pain in life, they cannot express emotion in poetry or art. But, that's just my opinion ... "

Quote _Constance

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Premiere Contest WinnerNever Forgotten

I will never forget you ...
   each one I love ... gone for Heaven above
      my sister left first and years rolled
       but I was left silent
    no talking
but I heard ...

       ~ it was grandma who reached into my silent world
and gave me a safe harbor and inspired me to write my pain and sorrow
       and I healed under her loving care ~ 

        when my father left me
      I was utterly shattered and broken
he had been my rock
I still recall our walks in nature and his sayings
    that I now understand ...

~ don't burn the bridges behind you  ... you may wish to go back
      pick your battles-   find the courage to walk away from a fight
hold your friends close to your heart ... and many others as well ~ 

when my baby died I wept for days and months ....
     and my mother held me to her heart
        when my husband left shortly after I was left empty 
               we lost my brother to a senseless war
and when mother left me I was beyond grief ... 
                          like a wilted rose I hung my head
         I was a lost balloon floating ... with no true north
       but, somehow I found myself again, 'till
grandma left me  'alone' ... in this world
                     she is the reason I am a writer today ...

         ~ but, yet again I found a fathomless strength within me
and also found my poetic voice and MUSE
       and express myself now  ... in poetry and art forms

... broken but okay ...  and I will never forget ~      


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April 22, 2021


Poetry/Verse/never forgotten
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1348-756-22
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France


Written for the Premier contest, Open Poetry 3,
sponsor, Charlotte Puddifoot, Judged 04/25/2021

Submitted into the Premier contest, Your 2021 N-A Choice poem
Sponsor, William Kekaula, Judged 04/27/2021

Fifth Place

Poem of the Day, April 24, 2021

Submitted to the Premier contest, Your Favorite Poem Of 2021
sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 11/23/2021

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Constance, congratulations on your win. You have taken more tragedy than I can imagine and turned into a poetic, and personal, triumph. You are truly amazing! Sending you many blessings!
La France Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 6:07 PM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations, the wonderful comment and compliment, blessing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 5:57 AM
A poignant tribute to your love ones and to your strength, Constance. Congrats on your top win.
La France Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Line, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Cohen Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Moving and inspiring poetry, Constance. Best to you. ~Eric
La France Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Eric, thanks for the compliment, friendship ~peace and tranquility _Constance
Daniel Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 5:29 AM
This poem sums up your life in beautiful verse, Constance, you are strong and soaring, congratulations:)
La France Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Jo, thank you for the compliment and congratulations. I have survived all my sorrows because of a fathomless strength dwelling within me ~ love and serenity _Constance
Agustin Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 3:32 AM
Congrats! Thanks again for sharing this... making me vicariously experience a great part of your life, making me thank the Lord for enabling you to inspire others through your writing talent. God bless you.
La France Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Beata, thanks for the congrats and compliment, God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance
Allison Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 3:41 PM
such a moving piece Constance I'm amazed I hadnt commented on this before! Many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Jan, thank so much for the compliment and the congrats, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Johnson Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 7:09 AM
This is powerful. Congrats.
La France Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Curtis, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Liguori Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations Constance on your heartfelt writing and win.
La France Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Robert, thanks for the congratulations and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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November 23, 2021 at 7:53 PM
Congratulations on your top win. You're amazing sweet friend. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Gina, thanks for the congratulations and comment ~love and serenity _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 7:47 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win Constance. Blessings xxoo
La France Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Connie, thanks for the congratulations and compliment, blessing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Romios Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 4:27 AM
Belated greetings on this one. Like you, went through pain, death, loss, Plenty of beatings, near death five times But refuse to right about them. Out ot that dreck, sprang a miracle. More than a Poet, a human being, who has made a difference in this universe. I write a lot about making a difference in whatever we do. I am not one happy to see flowers grow while mans inhumanity to man grows. We both are on tbe top 100 list. Pangie xx
La France Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Pangie, thanks for visiting my poem today and commenting, we have both suffered in life and came out stronger for it, I write my pain in poetry as it has become my forte and if I can write it then I can release the pain like birds set free, love _Constance
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May 11, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Death indeed is mysterious/ To know about it, none is curious/ Your losses are indeed serious/ They can't make life hilarious/ It proves life is just spurious/ But, your hoping is glorious/ Your words can make this World prosperous/ Of course your poem makes me feel dolorous/ May peace make your mind's state salubrious!
La France Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:53 PM
MV, thank you for the poetic comment, peace _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:02 PM
I see you got POTD and a win from William with this one. That is AWESOME, Constance. I have written a few emotional poems in my life, but I guess I mostly gravitate toward fantasy,, humorous and fiction poetry. You have more than your fair share of suffering, and your poetry truly shows this!
La France Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Andrea, thank you for the comment and compliment, yes getting the POTD was amazing as was my win in William's contest. I have had success with the poem. Yes, I write emotional poetry and I know you can too because you have in some of my previous contests, dig deep into your soul, serenity _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Constance ~ heartfelt, so much hardship. Hugs xx
La France Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Line, thanks so much for the congrats and comment, peace _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:28 PM
Congratulations on POTD! A worthy win! Sorrow runs so deep. Touching how your mother held you to her heart. I remember one heartbreak, where I came home after working the midnight shift with a man who broke my heart. I fell onto my bed and cried my eyes out as my mother comforted me. I miss her already!
La France Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:41 AM
Kim, thank you for the congratulations and comment, I miss my mother every moment of every day since her too young death, peace _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. An "Amazing" Write. Have a blessed day writing away..................
La France Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, peace _Constance
Alex Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations!
La France Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Alex, thanks for the congratulations, peace _Constance
Buhagiar Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Life is sad for it seems we were born to grieve. My apologies for missing my congratulations for your POTD. I beg forgiveness.
La France Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Victor, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, appreciate, no need to give forgiveness, love _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 7:29 PM
This is the second poem today I have found where my comment disappeared. Your poem is so wonderful and and I faved it Constance. It is poignant and beautiful. Congratulations on POTD! Blessings xxoo
La France Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:08 PM
Connie, thank you for the compliment and the FAV, appreciate, love _Constance
Wolf Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Here's to you, Constance, for this POTD. Truly, your lost balloon has return, expunged of any 'hot air' and filled with haunting poetic beauty. Light and Joy, Gershon
La France Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:08 PM
Gershon, thank you for the lovely comment, love _Constance
Summers Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Constance, congratulations on receiving POTD honors for your poem. So well deserved. John
La France Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:09 PM
John, thank you so much for the congratulations, love _Constance
Nicole Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 6:52 PM
Your heart has been through so much, leaving you without a voice. I can feel your pain. Your *Grandma* lifted you up where you belong. You are an amazing woman and a very talented poetess. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
La France Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Brandy, thank you for that beautiful comment, and congratulations, love _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 1:59 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. An "Amazing" Write. Your pen was writing overtime. Your line, "... broken but okay ... and I will never forget ~" was the best ending. So sorry. Life can be so very cruel. Have a blessed day..................
La France Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, love _Constance
Hankins Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations, my friend, for having your poem selected as POTD. It is truly deserving of the honor.
La France Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:11 PM
Milt, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, love _Constance
Pettit Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Nicely written. Congratulations on having this selected as poem of the day.
La France Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Robert, thanks for the compliment and congratulations , love _Constance
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