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Never Forget That All Love Is Eventually Lost-

I once walked in the falling snow holding your hand I was always warm even if it was frozen outside and in the summer we would tiptoe in the sand but like the sea your love has changed its tide you said things weren't the same as before and made me not want to love anymore you and I would lie under the shooting stars and forget that we were humans too promising each other we would make it far but both the promises and stars fell into the blue you've left me lying alone on that grassy floor and made me not want to love anymore when times get quiet all I do is wonder if you are thinking about me as well especially during storms of lighting and thunder and when, behind us, moonlit shadows fell you lost the time for me and the ability to adore and made me not want to love anymore I once couldn't be happier like a innocent child whenever we would sleep together at night you'd close your eyes and I just always smiled but you were confused on what was wrong and right and like your eyes, you soon closed my heart's door and made me not want to love anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/3/2009 11:15:00 PM
You have the ability to open ones heart with your words. The tone of this poem, the innocense of love and forever and the stark reality of a broken trust.
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Date: 5/2/2009 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 4/29/2009 11:41:00 AM
Congrat's on being features this week Luke, nice work...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 10:41:00 AM
Luke, congrats on having your poem featured this week!!!!!!
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Date: 4/27/2009 3:17:00 PM
This gave me goosebumps and made me catch my breath. A truely beautiful poem. Congratulations on your feature. Kat
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Date: 4/27/2009 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations Luke on your poetry being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 4/27/2009 4:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2009 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations on this poem being featured this week....very lovely, sad but lovely. Best wishes, Carrie
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:32:00 PM
Luke, this is a nice poem my friend. I like it. Congrats. Mine is also featured ths week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/11/2009 11:14:00 AM
life has given you poetry to express your creative thoughts! good job! Jim
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