Kacey Greenlee Poet Elegy

''Never Finished''

Fragments And Crumbs Of Life,All The Little Pieces...John Ruskin...1853

Heartache inside my scattered soul.
Memories rests on the dawn of day.
Brace these silk tears.
As flesh has perished.
Moms' smile has vanished.
My arms left empty.
Still my lavished love remains full.

written by...Kacey Greenlee
kaceymike29
For ..''All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest''...
Sponsored by...Constance La France...A..Rambling..Poet..
6/20/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 27, 2011 at 11:26 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Kacey. Love, Carol

Jack Horne June 26, 2011 at 10:02 AM Many congrats, Kacey : )

Elaine George June 26, 2011 at 12:05 AM An incredible Elegy - the absolute depths of emotion conveyed in this MASTERPIECE, Kacey. Many congrats on your sensational win. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2011 at 8:19 PM I like 'em short like this one, Kacey. A lot said in these few words.I enjoyed reading this. Congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 24, 2011 at 6:02 PM My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Kacey

Cory Long June 24, 2011 at 4:35 PM congrats on your win with this stunning entry, cory

Michael J. Falotico June 24, 2011 at 3:45 PM I knew this would be in the top 10!! Congrats my dear... luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 24, 2011 at 3:08 PM Congrats Kacey on your excellent win in the contest with this expressive tribute to your Mom.. thankxx for your lovely comments on my Mom's birthday poem today.. we understand our losses luv.. enjoy your win as a treasure from her above..luv..

Jack Horne June 23, 2011 at 12:43 PM Lovely tribute to your mother, Kacey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 22, 2011 at 7:25 PM a tender touching write Kacey.. I sure do miss my Mom's loving arms too my friend.. beautiful expressions in this piece ..good luck in the contest ..Constance will surely be impressed luv..

James Foulk June 22, 2011 at 11:00 AM a great write Kacey. i really likede this one good luck in contest. James Foulk June 22, 2011 at 11:04 AM I also am sorry for your lost, i liked the way you took your feelings and put them into this poem is what i met in my comment. you never get over losing your mother i'm still hurting over losing my mom in 1997 but it helps to write about it.

Wilma Neels June 22, 2011 at 10:18 AM Kacey, quite a touching elegy, I love the title you gave this one.. wishing you all the best for the contest ;) love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire June 22, 2011 at 3:29 AM I'm sorry for your loss, Kacey. Your poem touched my heart. Beautifully written elegy and I wish you success in the contest. Even though your mom's smile is gone, she will live in your memory as mine does. Such a close bond we have with our mothers. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne June 21, 2011 at 1:34 PM Lovely write, Kacey

Bill Lindenmuth June 21, 2011 at 6:50 AM Kacey , a very touching poem, i lost my mom when i was 16 yrs old,yet i i still have some memories and conversations in my prayers to her. I really enjoyed this poem

James Foulk June 20, 2011 at 11:11 AM Kacey a very touching piece, my mom died in 1997 so know your feelings, i have writtne many poems about my mom and it reaaly helps to get throgh the pain. your love for your mom shows in this beautiful poem. thank you for commenting on Rain Drops.

Carolyn Devonshire June 20, 2011 at 9:07 AM Dear Kacey, your love for your mom will always be with you. Mine passed decades ago and the love still lingers. I'm not familiar with this contest, but really like your poem. It stands so well on its own. Love, Carolyn