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''Never Finished''

Fragments And Crumbs Of Life,All The Little Pieces...John Ruskin...1853

Heartache inside my scattered soul.
Memories rests on the dawn of day.
Brace these silk tears.
As flesh has perished.
Moms' smile has vanished.
My arms left empty.
Still my lavished love remains full.

written by...Kacey Greenlee
kaceymike29
For ..''All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest''...
Sponsored by...Constance La France...A..Rambling..Poet..
6/20/11

Copyright © Kacey Greenlee | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/27/2011 11:26:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Kacey. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/26/2011 10:02:00 AM Many congrats, Kacey : ) Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 6/26/2011 12:05:00 AM An incredible Elegy - the absolute depths of emotion conveyed in this MASTERPIECE, Kacey. Many congrats on your sensational win. Lainie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/24/2011 8:19:00 PM I like 'em short like this one, Kacey. A lot said in these few words.I enjoyed reading this. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/24/2011 6:02:00 PM My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Kacey Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 6/24/2011 4:35:00 PM congrats on your win with this stunning entry, cory Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 6/24/2011 3:45:00 PM I knew this would be in the top 10!! Congrats my dear... luv Michael Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/24/2011 3:08:00 PM Congrats Kacey on your excellent win in the contest with this expressive tribute to your Mom.. thankxx for your lovely comments on my Mom's birthday poem today.. we understand our losses luv.. enjoy your win as a treasure from her above..luv.. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/23/2011 12:43:00 PM Lovely tribute to your mother, Kacey Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/22/2011 7:25:00 PM a tender touching write Kacey.. I sure do miss my Mom's loving arms too my friend.. beautiful expressions in this piece ..good luck in the contest ..Constance will surely be impressed luv.. Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 6/22/2011 11:00:00 AM a great write Kacey. i really likede this one good luck in contest. Login to Reply James Foulk Date: 6/22/2011 11:04:00 AM I also am sorry for your lost, i liked the way you took your feelings and put them into this poem is what i met in my comment. you never get over losing your mother i'm still hurting over losing my mom in 1997 but it helps to write about it.

Wilma Neels Date: 6/22/2011 10:18:00 AM Kacey, quite a touching elegy, I love the title you gave this one.. wishing you all the best for the contest ;) love Wilma Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/22/2011 3:29:00 AM I'm sorry for your loss, Kacey. Your poem touched my heart. Beautifully written elegy and I wish you success in the contest. Even though your mom's smile is gone, she will live in your memory as mine does. Such a close bond we have with our mothers. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/21/2011 1:34:00 PM Lovely write, Kacey Login to Reply

Bill Lindenmuth Date: 6/21/2011 6:50:00 AM Kacey , a very touching poem, i lost my mom when i was 16 yrs old,yet i i still have some memories and conversations in my prayers to her. I really enjoyed this poem Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 6/20/2011 11:11:00 AM Kacey a very touching piece, my mom died in 1997 so know your feelings, i have writtne many poems about my mom and it reaaly helps to get throgh the pain. your love for your mom shows in this beautiful poem. thank you for commenting on Rain Drops. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/20/2011 9:07:00 AM Dear Kacey, your love for your mom will always be with you. Mine passed decades ago and the love still lingers. I'm not familiar with this contest, but really like your poem. It stands so well on its own. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply